1: khayal
sab say pehlay to dad daina chahooNgi Khaiyaal apko...itni achi nazam kehnay par....nazam ka khayal arachay acha hai magar diye gaye unwan par poora nahiN utarta...aur nazam maiN rawani ki bhi kami hai...so apki nazam ke points mere hisab say yeh haiN :

mozu = 2
andaz-e-bayaN = 2.5
total = 4.5

2: chariagy-aakhir-shab
aapne bhi itni achi nazam kahi...jiske liye yaqeenan mubarakbad apka haq hai...nazam ka khayal bohat acha hai..."muhabbat phir muhabbat hai"...magar nazam maiN rawani ki kami hai... apki nazam ke points huwe:

mozu = 3.5
andaz-e-bayaN = 3
total = 6.5

3: Tariq Aziz
aap bhi yaqeenan dad ke mustahiq haiN ke itni khubsoorat nazam kahi apne...bila shuba mujhe nazam pasand aai...khayal bhi khoob hai...magar...unwan say nisbat kuch kam si mehsoos huwi.... apki nazam ke points yeh haiN:

mozu = 2.5
andaz-e-bayaN = 4
total = 6.5

4: Filmsy
apne bhi aik achi nazam kahi so dad qubool kijiye...khayalat bhi achay haiN..magar rawani ki kami hai...magar umeed hai ke aap is mas'alay par bhi qabu pa laingay/gi....points daraj-e-zail haiN :

mozu = 3
andaz-e-bayaN = 3.5
total = 6.5

5: Haya N
Haya bhi yaqeenan dad ki mustahiq haiN itni khubsoorat nazam kehnay par... mujhe yeh nazam bohat pasand aai...mozu bhi bohat dilkash hai...khayalat bhi khoob haiN aur rawani bhi...v weldone Haya @};-.....nazam ke points yeh haiN :

mozu = 4
andaz-e-bayaN = 4
total = 8

6: WithLove
yaqeenan yeh bhi aik bohat dilkash nazam hai...jispar Withlove daad ke mustahiq haiN...agarchay nazam khasi taweel hai magar khayalat khoob haiN...mozu bhi acha hai..magar kahiN kahiN rawani ki kami mehsoos huwi...points yeh haiN:

mozu = 4
andaz-e-bayaN = 3.5
total = 7.5

7: LuckyLibra
apne bhi achi nazam kahi....dad qubool kijiye....khayalat ke to kiya hi kehnay...bohat khubsoorat khayalat say muzayyan nazam hai...magar flow aur rawani ki bohattt kami mehsoos huwi... apki nazam ke points hasb-e-zail haiN:

mozu = 3.5
andaz-e-bayaN = 3.5
total = 7

8: pessimist
aik achi nazam kehnay par ap bhi dad ke/ki mustahiq haiN...khayalat achay hain nazam ke...alfaz ka chunai bhi acha raha...magar rawani aur wazan waghaira ki kami dikhai di....apki nazam ke points yeh haiN:

mozu = 2
andaz-e-bayaN = 3
total = 5

9: :Qassim:
aik interesting aur khubsoorat nazam kehnay par aap dad ke mustahiq haiN....nazam parh kar khasa lutf aaya...pariyoN ke dais ki kahani jaisi ... alfaz ka chunao bohat khubsoorat...rawani bhi...mozu bharpoor akkasi karti huri nazam........points kuch yooN haiN...

mozu = 4
andaz-e-bayaN = 4.5
total = 8.5

10 : Quill
yaqeeeenannnn...bayh addd dilkash nazam kahi aapne...bohat si daad ke mustahiq haiN aap...bohat hat kar likhi gaii nazam mujhe bohat pasand aai....points yeh haiN:

mozu = 4.5
andaz-e-bayaN = 5
total = 9.5

11: Silentmotions
bohat khubsoorat nazam kahi aapne...bohat si dad apke liye ..... nazam agarchay mukhtasir hai magar khayalat bohat achay haiN...points kuch yooN haiN:

mozu = 3.5
andaz-e-bayaN = 4
total = 7.5

aap sab sathiyoN ki shirkat ka bohat shukriya...n best of luck 2 all @};-
khush rahiye

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