Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum - View Single Post - Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi (Sept. 06)

**kanch ki mehroo** · #1 09-25-2006, 06:26 PM

is martaba muqabla-e-nazam goi ke liye jo unwan diya gaya tha...woh tha "muhabbat"...hum un sab sho'ra ke shukar guzar haiN jinhoN ne bharpoor tareeqay say muqablay maiN shirkat ki...aur apni khubsooorat tahareer hum sab ke sath share keeN...@};-

jaisa ke aap sab ko ilm hai ke muqablay ke nataaij ka ailaan judges ke mushtarka faislay par mabni hoga...Judges say guzarish hai ke woh yakam October tak is thread maiN apne faislay say aagah karaiN...judges har nazam ko 1-10 tak marks daiNgay..aur aakhir maiN tamaam judges ke diye gaye marks ko jama kar ke hatmi nataaij ka ailaan kia jayega...

judges ke naam darj-e-zail haiN:

(Ankaboot, Inam, Aik Lamha, Shagufta Basit, Kanch ki mehroo, Zain, wandering thoughts)

Evalutaion ka criteria yeh hai

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul)
mozu (5 marks)
total marks = 10
tamam judges k diye huway score ka ausat asal score hoga...

muqablay maiN shamil nazmaiN yeh haiN:

1: khaiyaal
CHAHAT KI EK DOORI

Zindagi badalti hai
Chahatain badalti hain
Loog bhi badalte hain
Per,aik shaks tha
Maire dil mai rehta tha
Dharkanoo mai busta tha
Mai bun kar chalakta tha
Sur ke saare sazoon mai
Ahsas uska hota tha
Paas jub ke aata tha
Dil mai khatak si hoti thi
Dharkanain si rukti theen
Chahat ki ek doori
Phir se banti rehti thi
Aaina bhi hota tha
Saamne mai hoti thi
Baal sanwaar kar apne mai
joora sa kus laite thi
Laal laal honton ko mai
Surkhi se kar laiti thi
Halka halka kaajal mai
Ankhoon mai bhar laiti thi
Payail pehen kar paoon mai
Mai chun chun karti rehti thi
Khawahish bhi mairi tb
khawahish na rehti thi
Go ke socha karti thi
Rasta mai rokoon gi
Hath ho ga haathon mai
Tub mai us se keh doon gi
Chaahat ki ek doori
Doori aik chahat ki
ub ke bandh daloon gi

2: chariagy-aakhir-shab
"MOHUBBAT"

YAH JO LAFZ MOHUBBAT HAY
PARBATYON SE IS MAIN WASHT HAY
AJAB SE JAZBAYON KI SHIDAT HAY
MAGAR GANAA
MOHUBBAT TO PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY
YAH TO APNI APNI KISMAT HAY
KISI K LEAY BAY-FEZ ABIDAT HAY
KISI KI UMAR BAHR KI RAYZAT HAY
MAGAR JANAA
MOHUBBAT TO PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY
JANAY IS MAIN KHUDA KI KYA HIKMAT HAY
MOHUBBAT KARNAY WALAY K
MUKDAR MAIN SAKHT AZEAYT HAY
MAGAR JANAA
MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY
AHSAS K GAHNAY GUNGLE MAIN
ROOH KI BAY NAM MUSAFAT HAY
MAGAR JANAA
MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY
LAKHAYON DUKH SAH KAR B
LAB PAY NA KOI SHKAYAT HAY
K MOHUBBAT KARNAY WALYON KI
SADYON SAY YAH RAWAYT HAY
BAJA K IS KI RAHYON PER
JAFA BHI AIK HAQEQAT HAY
MAGAR JANAA
MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY
AYAN IS BAT SAY IS KI AHMEAYT HAY
IS JAZBAY KO KHUDA SAY NISBT HAY
HAMRA WAGOD SRAA-PA ZILAT HAY
US KI ZAT MUGASM RAHMAT HAY
YAH GO LAFZ MOHUBBAT HAY
PARBATYON SE IS MAIN WASHT HAY
AJAB SE JAZBAYON KI SHIDAT HAY
MAGAR JANAA
MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY!!

3: Tariq Aziz

4: Filmsy

5: Haya n

6: WithLove

7: LuckyLibra

8: pessimist

Mohabbat kia hai

Log kehtay hain
Mohabbat!!!
Ik rog hai
Ik dhong hai
Dil ki azari hai
Waqat ki barbadi hai
Mohabbat kuch nahin
Mohabbat!!!
Faraib hai
Mohabbat!!!
Hawas hai
Mohabbat!!!
Dhoka hai
Lakin!!!
Main kehti hoon
Mohabbat!!!
Ik aag hai
Ik raag hai
Mohabbat!!!
Ik piyas hai
Mohabbat hi to zindgi ki aas hai
Mohabbat!!!
Ik janoon hai
Dil ka sakoon hai
Mohabbat ik saaz hai
Zindgi ka raaz hai
Mohabbat ik fasan hai
Zindgi ka taran hai
Mohabbat ik jolani hai
Zindgi ki kahani hai
Mohabbat kia hai?
Mohabbat dil hai
Mohabbat dharkan hai
Mohabbat badan main dorta hooa lahoo ha

9: :Qassim:

tumhaiN dosto ik kahaanii sunaa'ooN
k raajaa se raanii milii kiss tarah se
puraanaa naheiN yeh abhii ka hai qissah
jo tum sun rahe ho yeh meri zabaanii
tasavvur meN khud ko chalo lay k waaN per
jahaaN pehlii baarii milay thay yeh dono
woh purnoor mehfil woh dilkaSh nazaaraa
falak sa samaa thaa zameeN per bhi yaaroN
magar aise mahaul meN yeh sitam tha
woh kursii peh baiThaa tha tanhaa akayla
khayaaloN ki dunya meN masroof tha woh
meheknay lagii phir achaanak fizaa'aiN
khayaaloN kii dunya se baahar woh aayaa
nazar jab phiraa'ii to kya dekhta hai
parii se bhi zyaadaa haseeN ik haseenaa
qadam do qadam door uss se khaRee hai
ajab kaSh.makaSh meN woh banda khaRaa hai
kabhii dekhtaa hai woh surKhii laboN kii
kabhii dekhtaa hai woh zulfoN ko uss kii
dil e naatawaaN kee ajab kaifiat hai
bechaaraa yeh sochay mujhay kya huvaa hai
hai bijlii ki raftaar kyuN merii dhaRkan
woh chaahe kay jaa'ay qareeN uss parii kay
kare uss se baataiN woh dunya jahaaN kii
khabar aaKhir uss ko yeh hone lagii kay
hai pehlii nazar meN muhabbat ka jaadoo
muhabbat ki dil meN kalii khil rahii hai
khizaaN ab chaman se hai hone ko ruKhsat
magar aik or marhale se hai jaanaa
haseenah se izhaar e ulfat hai kerna
juTaa ker woh himmat gaya paas uss kay
kahaa jaa kay uss se mujhay kuch hai kehna
muhabbat ka tum se hai izhaar kerna
yeh aaNkhaiN tumhaarii lagaiN jheel jaisii
hai saaNsoN meN terii guloN jaisii khuShboo
terii kaalii zulfaiN ghaTaa baadaloN kii
dewaanaa samajhker mujhay Taalnaa mat
muhabbat jo tum se hai sachchii muhabbat
meN yeh maantaa hooN k kuch dair pehlay
sahaare muqaddar k ham tum milay haiN
magar haq to haq hai jo sach hai woh sach hai
yeh sun ker sabhii kuch lagii muskuraane
nazar ko jhukaakay woh Sharmaakay thoRaa
lagii bolne phir Khudaa jaantaa hai
maiN ab tak hooN zindaah isee din ki Khaatir
muhabbat se mujhko tum apna kahogay
samajhnay kii koShiSH woh kernay lagaa k
yeh kya maajraa hai maiN kya sun rahaa hooN
maiN samjhaa muhabbat yeh thii aik tarfaa
magar yaaN ka manzar to badlaa huvaa hai
yahaaN per kahaanii yeh hotii naheiN khatm
abhii aur khuShyaaN manaanii haiN in ko
aur aaKhir meN rab se dua hai yeh merii
harik nazr e bad se rahaiN duur dono!

10: Quill

11: Silentmotions

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