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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts  Yaro aik ghazal k sath aik bar phir hazir huN.... aap k tabsry/corrections ka intzaar rahy ga... :::: in roman :::: abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga k sab mit ja'eN gy lekin fana koi nahi ho ga mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir
usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga Faseel-e La'makaN se mut'tasil seewar se lag kr
thaka behtha hy jo, mery siwa koi nahi ho ga mujhy maalum hy raah-e-fana pr mery baad ab tak misaal-e-gerd rasty naapta koi nahi ho ga kuch is andaaz se atraaf maiN bikhra laho us ka
k maqtal yuN kbhi pehly saja koi nahi ho ga |
Buhat hi umdah... buhat hi a'ala... kia baat hay... aik aik shair buhat khoobsoorat... kia baat hay Ustad ji... maza agaya qasam se...
mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir
usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga
kis kis shair ko quote karay insan... her shair aik se barh ker aik... aur maqta... kia hi khoob kaha hay...
U know what aap k andaz-i-BayaaN meiN aik khaas baat hay Faizan bhai.. baysakhtagi her her harf se tapakti hay... aur her lafz k liye aisa lagta hay jaisay wo jis jaga mojood hay.. shayad bana hi uss jaga k liye hay
shayeri k saray ramooz ka khayaal rakhtay huway.. itni ujli aur suthri shayeri..
Let me be your FAN..
Khush rahiye...
Likhtay rahiye