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 Re: abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga | |
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Originally Posted by quill  humn to abhi nay hain aur zain sahib ki ghazal per naqas si ray day kar abhi dobara jab online huay to aap ki ghazal padhi yaqeen kijay ga achhi ghazal hay
bohot hi achhi ghazal jissay hum padhna chahtay hain bar bar
bohot hi mubarak kay mustahiq hain aap aur
haan aap kab say likh rahay hain aur kia kissi
say kuchh seekha bhi hay aap nay
kyunkay aapkay lafzon main badi baat hay
aur yeh aik din main nahin aa jaati
zaroor aap kissi say istifaada hasil kartay
hongay ? wagarnaa yun to zain bhai bhi
achhi ghazal likhnay ki koshish kartay hain
magar woh talaazmay per aur arooz per
tawajja daitay daitay mazmoon ko hi
kahin ka kahin lay jaatay hain
abhi kisi or ko kam hi padha hay
magar hamain yeh site achhi lagi
kuchh samajh boojh hay tanqeed kartay
hain magar islaahi na kay .........
achha ji ijaazat dijay
aapka
QUILL
| bohat shukriya jnaab k aap ne meri ghzal ko is qabil samjha & us pr apni qeemti raa'y pesh ki...
jnaab mujhy likhty kuch ziada arsa nahi hoa... yehi koi teesra(3) sal chal raha hy.... and u know im enjoying it...
yar pata hy jab aik sher hota hy to kitni khushi hoti hy (us karb k sath sath, jo is sher ki takhleeq ka baa'is banta hy)... (un-expressable....)
sher to bikul aap k bachoN ki trha hoty haiN... jin maiN rafta rafta nikhaar aata jata hy...
Zain Bhai aik achy shair haiN... aur bohat umda ghazal likhty haiN.... mera khyaal hy abhi aap ne un ka kalam nahi parha....
inshallah aap ko yahaN bohat se logoN ki tehreereN parhny ko mileN gi jo ham se bhi acha likhty haiN...
aur ye site to hy hi achi, aap ko kyuN'na achi lagti... its just like a family... a place where u feel like at Home....
so be a member of family here.. and enjoy the taste of good company...
ye phool aap k liay @};-
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