thanks uncommon, asif,zain,mughy bohut khushi howi k ap logayon nay isay pasand keya ,is bat ki haqeqat say to kisi ko inkar nahi k achi poetry woh hay jisay parhnay waly ko lagay k woh kahyin na kan=hyin us k jazbat ki tarjumani kar rahi hay, aag tak main nay jo b likha woh bas mayre dairy tak mahdod tha,main nay kabhi kisi ko is leay nahi dikhya k woh dad wasoli na ban gay , magar ab is leay aisa keya k itna to mughy malom hay k main kesa likhti hon lakin kayon k abhi tiflay maktab hon so yah kafi nahi ,ap sab ki ray mughy acha likhnay main madad day gi ,main yahn nayi hon is leay sab ko to nahi ganti magr pahir b bohut acha likhtay hain ap sab mughy khushi ho gi agar ap ko kahin mayre kisi poetry main islah ka pahlo nazar aay to mughy zaror batyin
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