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Old 08-05-2006, 07:51 PM
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Default Re: Ray-shumari Baray Nazmgoi muqabla



sab hi sathiyoN ne bohattt khubsoorat poems likheeN....agarchay marks daina khasa mushkil hoga magar karna to hai hi...so lets start

Meer ji:
Meer bhai sab say pehli ghalti yeh ke aapne muqabla-e-nazam goi maiN aik adad ghazal share kar di... isliye ab isay ghazal ke taur par hi marks diye jayeNgay...
ghazal ka khayal acha hai...magar mozu par garift nahiN .. ghazal ke aksar ashaar behar say kharij haiN...matla aur 3rd last shair maiN qawafi ka khayal nahiN rakha gaya.... apki ghazal ke liye 4 marks

karb:
bohat khubsoorat andaz...dilkash khayalat... magar...mozu nahiN diya gaya is nazam ko...nazam aakhir maiN unwan say bhi kuch kuch hat si gaii....lekin beharhaal..majmoori taur par aik achi nazam.. meri taraf say 6.5 marks

luckylibra:
aapne bhi nazam ki bajaye ghazal keh di...
diye gaye unwan say kafi hat kar likhi gai ghazal...aksar misray behar say bhi out haiN... majmooi taur par khubsoorat ghazal... 5 marks

Heer_malik:
khubsooorat kawish...magar aik aur ghazal...
teri bandagi maiN fana huwa...
v nice.... 5.5 marks

:Qassim:
beautifulllll poem...bohat hi dilkash nazam...mozu bhi khoob diya gaya....rawani , alfaz ka chunao, khayalat..sab khoob.... 7.5 marks

Mystique:
wahhhh...unwan ke to kia hi kehnay... aur nazam bhi bohat haseeen...khayalat bohat dilkash...alfaz ka iste'maal...sab aa'laa... 8 marks

Rida Jabeen:
khubsoorat unwan ke sath aik bohat achi nazam...alfaz ka chunao bohat khubsoorat..markazi khayal bhi dilkash raha....7.5 marks

Aik Lamha:
mere maseeha...wahhhh...u nwan maiN to goya jan rahi nazam ki...bohatttttt hi khubsooorat nazam...dil maiN utarti huwi...diye gaye mozu ki mukammal tarjumani karti huwi nazam... 9 marks

Shumaela Rana:
khubsoooorat kawish, dilkash khayalat ...magar.....unwan say bohat hat kar ....5 marks

best of luck 2 all of u guyz@};-
khush rahiye
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