AssalamoAlaikum,
kisi contest ka judge ban'na koi aasaan kaam nahi hai. itney khoobsoorat kalaam ko marks dena ke aik member jeet jaye ........ kafi mushkil hai. magar rasm-e-dunya bhi nibhani hai iss liye kaam ka aaghaz karta hoo'n aur tarteebwaar har nazm ko points de raha hoo'n

Meerji: hazrat aap ne nazmgoyi ke contest mein ghazal arsaal kar di
ghazal pe baat kartey huye agar dekha jaye to ghazal ka khayaal umda hai , magar , iss mein takneeki khaamiyaan bohat hain. pehley hi shair mein qaafiya radeef aik doosrey se alag ho gey hain.
KARB KI IS RAAT KA GUZARNA ABHI BAAQI HAI
MAIRAY ZAKHMOON SAI LAHOO KA RASNA ABHI BAAQI HAI
pehley shair ke pehley misrey mein Abhi , shayed apni jaga pe nahi tha
ghazal ki bahar mein choti bari ho rahi hai ahsaar ke saath. iss pe bhi tawajjo deney ki zaroorat hai
meri tarf se aap ki iss ghazal ko 5 marks

Karb: bohat umda nazm share ki aap ne
ikhtesaar ke saath aap ne chand sawaloo'n ke saath karb ko bohat umdagi se bayaan kiya hai. meri taraf se iss nazm ko 8 points

Luckylibra: aap ne bhi nazm goyi ke muqaabla mein aik adad ghazal share kar di . beshak ghazal ka khayaal bohat umda hai aur mujhey zati tor pe aap ki ghazal achhi lagi ke mukhtalif mozoo pe likhi hai aap ne. aaj kal ke doar mein muamlaat-e-zindegi pe bohat kam likha jata hai , meri taraf se aap ki kawish ko 5 marks.

Heer_malik: agar main ghalati nahi kar raha to ghaliban aap ne ghazal paish ki hai yahan pe. jabke muqaabla nazm goyi ka tha . agar issey ghazal ki nazar se dekha jaye to aap ki kawish yaqeenan bohat umda hai. magar nazm goyi ke muqaabla mein aik nazm ko hi hona chahye tha. meri taraf se aap ke kalaam ko 5 marks

Qasim: bohat khoobsoorat kalaam paish kiya aap ne aur nazm ka unwaan bhi bohat zabardast hai takhayyul bhi umda hai nazm ka , alfaaz mein tasalsul bhi shamil hai.
merei taraf se iss nazm ko 7 marks.

Mystique: mukhtasit magar bohat khoobsoorat nazm paish ki aap ne. khayaalaat mein rawaani aur tasalsul bohat umda hai. meri taraf se iss nazm ko 8.5 marks

Rida jabeen: bohat khoobsoorat nazm hai aur taweel bhi. itni tawaalat tak kisi nazm ko iss tarah rawaa'n rakhna itna aasaan nahi, magar aap ne yeh kaam bohat umdagi se kiya hai . meri taraf se iss nazm ko 8 marks

Aik Lamha: bhai ji bohat umda nazm hai , tasalsul hai khayaalaat mein , alfaaz mein rawaani bhi hai , khayaal bhi bohat umdagi se paish kiya gaya hai. merei taraf se iss nazm ko 8.5 points in total

Shumayela rana : nazm mein rawani bhi mojood hai aur andaz-e-bayaan bhi achha hai. magar achanak nazm ka khayaal badal gaya. aaghaz se anjaam tak ........ Karbala ki wo taigh ho ...... iss satar se nazm ne achanak palta khaya aur mujhey laga ke nazm kamkhayal jo aaghaz mein tha wo tabdeel ho gaya hai.
meri taraf se iss nazm ko 7 points

best of luck to all participants and hope to see more of yr work in future
Allah Hafiz.
Ankaboot.

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