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Originally Posted by zain  ASLAM O ALEKUM, dosto kese mizaaj hain?umeed hai bakher honge, lijiye,aek aor ghazal ke saath aek baar phir haazir hoon,ghazal kesi hai is ka andaaza aap ki aara hi se ho sake ga,so PLEASE apni qeemati aara se zaroor aagah kijiye ga, bahot khush rahiye, ALLAH NIGEHBAAN. | Very Nice, Laikin matle,a ka doosra miSr,a krafting ka mutaqaazi he. Isay mazeed behtar banaya ja sakta he. " ShakhS har aik hi " kuchh bojhal sa ho gia he. Isi tarha doosray she,ar ka doosra miSr,a pehlay walay miSre,a ka sath naheeN de pa raha, yooN yeh she,ar do lakht horaha he. Aap ki yeh ghazal achhi he, laikin lagta he k aap ne isay likhnay ke ba,ad jaldi post kar dia he. Isghazal ko mazeed nikhara jasakta he. Bahar haal mairi taraf se dhairoN daad qabool kijiay. Umeed he k aap mairi in ma,arozat ka bura naheeN manaiN gay. Khush rehiay, likhtay rehiyay. Allah karay zao e qalam aor ziada.:(flowers) |