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Aap doston ke reply se andaza hota hai ke is ghazal main abhi bahot si ghaltiyaan hain,jin ki taseeh bahot zaroori hai,(shaaid main kuchh jald baazi kar gaya).
meri MOD hazraat se darkhwaast hai ke PLEASE is THREAD ko DELETE kar diya jaaye,......main is ghazal ko nazar saani ke ba.ad dobara post karoon ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
ALLAH NIGEHBAAN.
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Last edited by zain; 07-18-2006 at 03:35 PM.
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