ASLAM O ALEKUM Ashraf bhahi, Ik dil he, aik jaan he rakht e safar meraa
Mayraa yeh kul jahaan he rakht e safar meraa.
bahot khoobsurat sher hai,daad qabool kijiye,
Zanjeer ban ke paaoN se lipTii he yeh zameen
Aor us pe aasmaan he rakht e safar meraa.
pehla misra bahot khoobsurat hai,lekin doosare misre main rakht e safar aap ne kin ma.anon main liya hai is ki zara wazaahat kar dain PLEASE.1.gif ")1")
Daryaa o dasht ab meray a,adaa,a ki saf maiN haiN
Goyaa ik imtehaan he rakht e safar meraa.
bahot khoobsurat sher kaha hai aap ne,dheron daad is sher ki nazar,
AankhoN se is cheraagh ka kuchh aisa rabt he
Manzil ka ik nishaan he rakht e safar meraa.
yeh sher parne main to bahot khoobsurat hai,lekin is ke pehle misre main IS CHIRAAGH ka mafhoom waaziya naheen,aor doosare misre ke muani samajhne se qaasir raha hoon(shaid kam aqqali ki bina par) ke rakht e safar , manzil ka nishaan kese ho sakta hai?PLEASE is ki thori se wazaahat kar dijiye ga,shaaid aap ke samjhaane se baat samajh main aa jaaye, Rakkhay huay he aaj bhi apnay HiSaar maiN
Mairay liyay amaan he rakht e safar meraa.
yahaan bhi RAKHT-E-SAFAR ko aap ne kin muani main istamaal kiya hai,samajhne se qaasir hoon,aor aap se is ki wazaahat ki darkhwaast karta hoon,umeed hai mayoos naheen karain ge, Ashraf yaqeeN banaakay liyay phir rahaa hooN saath
Kiaa dilnasheeN gumaan he rakht e safar meraa.
is sher ka doosara misra bahot khoobsurat hai,aor daad ka haqdaar hai,so dheron daad qabool kijiye,is khoobsurat misre ki takhleeq par,
lekin pehl misra apni naaqas ul aqqali ki bina par samajhne se qaasir raha hoon,PLEASE is ka mafhoom bhi bata dijiye ga,
Ashraf bhahi chaahata to baaqi logon ki tarah main bhi wah wah kar ke nikal jaata,lekin......... main bakhoobi jaanta hoon ke aap MASHA ALLAH bahot achhe shaair hain,aor na sirf asraar o ramooz ko jaante hain,balke khayaal aor adaaigi par bahot mazboot garifft bhi rakhte hain,.....so jo baatain mujhe samajh naheen aayain,main ne bila jhajak aap se poochh leen,is yaqeen ke saath ke aap meri baaton ka bura naheen maanain ge,aor doosara aap se yaqeenan kuchh na kuchh seekhne ko mile ga,
phir bhi agar mera koyi harf,koyi baat aap ki dil aazaari ka baais bane to us ke liye ma.azarat khwa hoon,aor sharmsaar hoon,aor is soorat main yeh yaqeen rakhta hoon ke aek bhahi doosare bhahi ko muaaf karne main der naheen kare ga,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye ke bahot achha likhte hain