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Originally Posted by meerji
jo khuaab suhanay sai lagtay thay
abb afsaanay sai bun gayyay hain
wo phool kalion ki pyari si gallian theen
wahin ik makan mai wo nazneen thi
wo muskurahatain jo honton per khilti theen
asman per roshan sitaron si lagti thi
wo nazuk si hatailian theen us ki
ghazaloon si nighain theen us ki
mai madhoosh mairi rooh munjamid thi
halankaie ishq baesab mazil baeyaqeen thi
saatain phir bhi kitni haseen theen
her sama khushnuma her cheez pur rangeen thi
or jub sub choota mujhe sai to yun laga
mai abb jaga hoon or wo mairi neend thi..........
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Waah Meerji, bohot khoobsurat aur mukammal ghazal kahii hai aap ne ... Bas kaheiN kaheiN per wazan meN gaRbaR hai, wagarna to ghazal to kamaal kee hai
Qassim Mirza
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