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Old 11-13-2005, 10:30 PM
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Default Re: *Teri Her Adaa Kay Saqay*

Salam Sis!What a melodious poem, khobsoorat rhythm aur flow. Aur "sadqay" aik desi tareeqa-i-tareef hai jissay tum ne khobsoorati se iss nazm main use kia hai. Allah karay berhay zor-i-kalam aur ziyada (ameen)Khush raho,Aatif
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