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Raay-Shumari Baraay Tarahi GHazal Sep,05 | | As'salam O Alaikum,
MAh-e September ki tarahi ghazal k leye Mohterma Parveen Shakir ka darj-e zail misra diya gaya tha Dukh Humarey They, Muqadder Ho Gai
is misrey pe jin jin shoa'ara nay apney kalaam muqabley k leye paish keye hum un k tah0e dill sey mamnoon hain ...
darj main muqabley main shamil shoa'ara k kalaam paish keye ja rahey hain .... aap ko jis shair ka kalaam uroos ki buniyaad pe mukammal lagey usey muntakhib kejeye koshish kejeye k zaati rawabit ko balaay taaq rakh k huqdar main huq main faisla keya jay Tarahi ghazal no-1 (ZAIN)
jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye
ashk aankhon ke,samandar ho gaye
hon mubarak sukh tre tum ko sanam
"dukh hamaare the,muqadar ho gaye"
ki muhabbat to mila , ham ko sila
khuab jo bhi the wo pathhar ho gaye
ham ne socha to,magar samjhe na kuch
gham mree taqdeer kiyoonkar ho gaye
khaar to the khaar,ham ne NAZ gar
phool bhi chhooye to khanjar ho gaye -------------------------------------------------------- tarahi ghazal no-2 (FARHAN USMANI) Me Ne Dil Ki Baat Jab Tujh Se Kahi...
Chand Taaray Sab Munawwar Ho Gaye...
Har Khushi Tujh Ko Muyyasar Aa Gai...
Aur, Gham Meray Muqaddar Ho Gaye...
Tere Milnay Se Na Jane kiya Huwa...
Dost Jitnay Thay Sitamgar Ho gaye...
Tashnagi Teri Mitanay Ke Liye...
Aankh ke Aansoo Samandar Ho Gaye...
Ek Zara Sa Sach Hi To Me Ne Kaha...
Kiya Huwa? Khamosh Kiyunkar Ho Gaye
Logon Ki Baton Me Tum Bhi Aa Gaye...
Tum Bhi Yun Badzan Sarasar Ho Gaye...
Aaj Aisa Lag Raha Hai Janay Kiyun...?
Tum Mere Kad Ke Barabar Ho Gaye...
Teray Jaanay Se Faqat Itna Huwa...
Aaj Hum Khud Ko Muyassar Ho Gaye...
Kal Jo Mere Khoon Ki Taqseer Thay...
Aaj Wo Hi Phool, Khanjar Ho Gaye...
Aik Muddat Baad Jab Dekha Tumhein...
Aisa Lagta Tha Ke Pathar Ho Gaye
Teray Dil Ki Aabiyari Ke Liye..
Mere DiL Ke Khait Banjar Ho Gaye...
Kal Talak Pehchanta Koi Na Tha...
Aaj Se Hum Bhi Sukhanwar Ho Gaye...
Wo Mere Dushman Thay Dushman Hi Rahay ... Tum Mere Apnay Thay, Kiyunkar Ho Gaye ----------------------------------------- tarahi ghazal no-3 (QASIM MIRZA)
Phool KaaNTe, haath Khanjar ho ga’ay
Khair ho apne jafaagar ho ga’ay
Kya falak bersaa’ay hai taazii Sharaab?
Maikaday veeraan kyuNker ho ga’ay?
Kee tasavvur meN tirii tasveer jab
Raastay khud hii munawwar ho ga’ay
Iss se baRhker aur kuch kehnaa naheiN
“Dukh hamaare thay muqaddar ho ga’ay”
Matlabii dunya kii rangat dekh lo
Dost bhii duShman baraabar ho ga’ay
ChhoRker jab se gayaa hamko tabeeb
Naa.tawaaN, beemaar o laaGhar ho ga’ay Ishq meN girtay rahay ubhray naheiN
Dard ka deevaan o daftar ho ga’ay
Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim: be.panaah
MaShq se aSh’aar behter ho ga’ay
------------------------------------- tarahi ghazal no-4 ( SHABNAM REHMAN)
Jaadui jaisay woh manzar ho gaye
murh ke dekha hum ne pather ho gaye
tum jo badlay tou na janay kis tarah
phool jitney the woh khanjar ho gaye
kaisi ye barish hui ab ke baras
khwaahishon ke khait banjar ho gaye
sukh tou jaisay qarz the us ke magar
dukh humaray the muqaddar ho gaye
shabnami lahja ye kis ka sun liya
jitney sehra the samunder ho gaye
tum se mil ke kitnay arsay baad phir
yun laga khud ko muyassar ho gaye ----------------------------------------------- Raay shumaari 30 September tak jaari rahey gi ........ aur nataij ka ailaan yakum October ko kya jaay ga.
aap sey guzarish hai k zaati talouq daari sey bala tar ho kar faisla kejeye aur muntakib karda ghazal ki khobiyoo aur khamiyoo ka jaiza bhi paish kejeye1.gif)
bohat shukriya
aap k tav'un ki mutamani HallaGulla Intazamiya
__________________ hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!!
Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon
Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum!
main tunziya muskura rahi hoon Shagufta Basit
Last edited by Shagufta Basit; 09-27-2005 at 10:14 PM.
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