waah/clap5 apki poems waqiyay insan ko speeechless kar deti hain aur aksar auqaaat to phir tareef kay alfaz hi nahi miltay jitni achi aap poems likhtay hain utni tareef karoon to kamm hai..."meri jaaan chip si lag jati hai" topic ka sentence bahdh khoobsurat hai jissay apnay poem pin out ki.....sach some words leave a very hard impression in ur mind aur ussi waqt jab poem ka koi idea click karay to likh dena chahiyay jaisay kay aapnay kaha kay aap kay zehn main achanak ayeee apnay likh dee/clap5

Bahut hi khoobsurat nazam with a wonderful topic sentence and not to forget easy vocabulary/y:-p aur saath main the poem has a very good flow of rhymes issi tarha aur achi poems likhain aur INSHALLAH ek poori kitaab bana kar hum sab ko copy dena apki poems ki collection bahut interesting hai yun likhtay rahiyay and keep sharing this wonderful art of urs