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Old 10-27-2004, 08:44 AM
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Walaikum salam Inam jee...aur sathiyoo...

bohot umdaah kalam hai Sabih aapka.... main naqqad hergiz nahi hoon.....isliye koi tabsara karnay se qasir rahoongi....

tareeef zaroor kar sakti hon.....aur apki poori ghazal hi bohot umdaah lagii... hasil'e ghazal shair jo mujhey laga woh ...

main ke tanha hoon mayra koi hawala bhi nahi
mujh pe ayein ge aub ilzaam tere naam ke baad

aue yeh shair bhi bohot hi umdaah...

shair kiya hai yeh mujhey aaj hua hai maloom
jo hua karta hai ilhaam tere naam ke baad

aisey hi khobsoorat likhte raheye......aur share karte raheye.... @};-

jeete raheye....khush raheye.....
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