OH KANWAL ITS REALLLY AN EXCELLENT AND OUTSTANDING POEM..
BOHOT KHOOBSOORAT GHAZAL HAY.

TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE @};-

Teri aankhon ko dekha to faq-qat itna khial aaya
Guzarin kis tarah umrain , salone jam se pehle @};-

THESE ARE SUPERB ASHAAR. /flowers