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**Eqan** · #51 06-09-2007, 05:11 AM

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Originally Posted by whispers

you are always kush amdeed

hmm theek hai hum wait karon ga

okay kartay rehiay....

**naz** · #52 06-09-2007, 04:19 PM

bhoooooooot maza aya or aj parhna naseb ho he gaya akhir kaaar

**Eqan** · #53 06-10-2007, 06:16 AM

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Originally Posted by naz

bhoooooooot maza aya or aj parhna naseb ho he gaya akhir kaaar

chaloo shukar hai...dair aaiy..durust aiy....>-v

**Kanwal** · #54 06-12-2007, 09:28 AM

Ummara Ahmad jesi mature writer sey aisi immature tehreer ki tawaqa nahi thi...apney guzishta andaz k bilkul bar aks wo yahan par amm mozou par waqt zaya karti hoi nazar aayi hain.....

ummara ahmad ka hawala hata kar iss tehreer ko dekha jaye to dilchasp zaroor hey magar ummara k qalam k shayan e shan nahi ....

**Eqan** · #55 06-12-2007, 07:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Kanwal

Ummara Ahmad jesi mature writer sey aisi immature tehreer ki tawaqa nahi thi...apney guzishta andaz k bilkul bar aks wo yahan par amm mozou par waqt zaya karti hoi nazar aayi hain.....

ummara ahmad ka hawala hata kar iss tehreer ko dekha jaye to dilchasp zaroor hey magar ummara k qalam k shayan e shan nahi ....

hmm..aap sai aisi bat sun kar hairat howi...aap ki sab batain apni jaga sahi hain..mager in sab sai qata-nazar aap nai shaid is bat per ghoor nahi kia k yeh aik "MAZAHIYA" tehreer thi...aur bohat halkay phulkay andaz main likhi gai thi...jahan tak is k immature honay ka taluq hai tou mera nahi khiyal k aisa hai...umera jin hasas mozua't per qalam uthati hain...un main sai yeh aik nahi tha..laikin is baat sai koi inkar nahi kar sakta k jahan mazhab hamari zindagi ka aik pehlo hai waheen...hamary haan ki nojawan nasal ki aisi sooch aur harkatain bhi is society ka manfi pehlo hain...aur phir is tehrer ka msg tou is k title main chupa hai..."Aisa kabhi nahi hota"

anyway...wrong calls ki badolat develop honay walay relationships per umera ki aik sanjeeda tehreer bhi manzar-e-aam per aa chuki hai..."darbar-e-dil"...

**Kanwal** · #56 06-14-2007, 09:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Eqan

hmm..aap sai aisi bat sun kar hairat howi...aap ki sab batain apni jaga sahi hain..mager in sab sai qata-nazar aap nai shaid is bat per ghoor nahi kia k yeh aik "MAZAHIYA" tehreer thi...aur bohat halkay phulkay andaz main likhi gai thi...jahan tak is k immature honay ka taluq hai tou mera nahi khiyal k aisa hai...umera jin hasas mozua't per qalam uthati hain...un main sai yeh aik nahi tha..laikin is baat sai koi inkar nahi kar sakta k jahan mazhab hamari zindagi ka aik pehlo hai waheen...hamary haan ki nojawan nasal ki aisi sooch aur harkatain bhi is society ka manfi pehlo hain...aur phir is tehrer ka msg tou is k title main chupa hai..."Aisa kabhi nahi hota"

anyway...wrong calls ki badolat develop honay walay relationships per umera ki aik sanjeeda tehreer bhi manzar-e-aam per aa chuki hai..."darbar-e-dil"...

aap bilkul theek keh rahi hain Eqan @};- lekin mujhey jo cheez iss kahani main immature lagi wo yehi hey k title dia gaya hey k aisa kabhi nahi hota aur issi ko zehan main rakhtey hoye kahani parhi shuroo ki jaye to aisi soch rakhney wali aur aisey kirdaron ko promote karney wali writers par tanz sa mehsoos hota hey aur larkion k sochney k iss andaz ki musalsal nafi nazar aati hey magar jonhi ikhtetam aata hey wo iskey bilkul ulat kar dia gaya...agar ikhtetam bhi aisa hi hota jis main kam umar larkion ki aisi soch ko nakam dekahaya jata aur khuabon main rehney wali larkion ko haqeeqat ka samna kara dia jata to zyada behtar tha ...title sey mutabiqat kar jati kahani...aur iska kuch maqsad nazar aata....thnx for reply Eqan.

**Eqan** · #57 06-16-2007, 07:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Kanwal

aap bilkul theek keh rahi hain Eqan @};- lekin mujhey jo cheez iss kahani main immature lagi wo yehi hey k title dia gaya hey k aisa kabhi nahi hota aur issi ko zehan main rakhtey hoye kahani parhi shuroo ki jaye to aisi soch rakhney wali aur aisey kirdaron ko promote karney wali writers par tanz sa mehsoos hota hey aur larkion k sochney k iss andaz ki musalsal nafi nazar aati hey magar jonhi ikhtetam aata hey wo iskey bilkul ulat kar dia gaya...agar ikhtetam bhi aisa hi hota jis main kam umar larkion ki aisi soch ko nakam dekahaya jata aur khuabon main rehney wali larkion ko haqeeqat ka samna kara dia jata to zyada behtar tha ...title sey mutabiqat kar jati kahani...aur iska kuch maqsad nazar aata....thnx for reply Eqan.

yehi baat hai jou main kahnay ki koshish kar rahi hoon kanwal...k is main ager anjam acha dikhaya gia hai tou is ka matlab hai k "aisa kabhi nahi hota"...ager anjam tragic hota tou title ki nafi hoti....ya fir ager anjam aap ki pasand ka hota tou title hona chahiay tha "Aisa hi hota hai"...

....aur phir yeh tehreer mazahiya na rehti...pata nahi main apni baat aap ko smajha pa rahi hoon ya nahi...anyways..apna y views hum sai share karnay ka bohat bohat shukriya...bohat sai loogoon nai aap sai agree kia ho ga.....

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