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RulesThis is a discussion on When i saw you within the Poetry of English Poets forums, part of the English Poetry category; When I Saw You I forgot every thing Every thing in this World Every thing of this Universe When I ...
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07-16-2008, 04:13 AM
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When I Saw You I forgot every thing Every thing in this World Every thing of this Universe When I came in my senses You left the place After you I feel as I am a very poor person in this World I feel as I am a very unluky man of this Universe That I couldnot say you a word I couldnot see you again I couldnot see you again for a long time And When I Saw You When I Saw You again I filled with happiness But, at the next moment My heart was going to burst My eyes was filled with water Because Two little babies were with you Oh! God why I Saw You again                  |
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08-18-2008, 07:04 PM
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hey dude ! no offense! but try reading good pieces first, go thru them time and again. ur gonna improve gradually. Not everyone is instinctive like ghalib & co. No criticism n i m nobody for that, just a humble piece of advice.. nice try ! keep it flowing ..but gradually ..u will find ur niche 1.gif ")1") hope it helps regards, Farrukh
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