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This is a discussion on wo na ........... :shy within the Poetry on Demand forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; Originally Posted by Ankaboot kya apni hai /thinking agar Nazm ki bat kar rahey hain to ji haa'n , yeh ...
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#11
01-05-2005, 09:01 PM
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__________________ ~~**~Ya ALLAH Hum Muslmano ko Dushmano Sai Azaadi Ata Farma~**~                  |
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#12
01-06-2005, 04:41 AM
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/aoa Janab Irfan Bhai aik tasheeh ki janib tawajjah dilana cahonga key 2nd line mein "key mein aankhein band karkey" mein KEY bari "yeh: se nahi balkey gool "yeh" se aaye ga ... I mean Hah wali "yeh" Jesey Jabkey likhtey hein.... Aur aik Aur baat key "karon tasawwur tera" mein "wao" key uper "hamza" nahi huta.... sorry yeh just nazam ki khobsorti behtar karney key liye likha hey ... isko mashwara samjhiyeh ga koi Point Out nahi hey ...coz nazam Khurram ki Daad ki mustahiq hey aur usper aap ki itni khobsorat composing .... /weldone Wassalam
__________________ Ager Muhabbat Pe Bharosa Rahe Na Dunya Main To Koi Shakhs Muhabbat Ka Hosla Na Karay Suna Hay Us Ko Muhabbat Dua'in Daiti Hai Jo Dil Pe Chot To Khaye Magar Gila Na Kare Last edited by ~Wasi~; 01-06-2005 at 04:47 AM. |
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#13
01-06-2005, 10:11 AM
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#15
06-08-2007, 06:04 PM
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nice, aur wasi ki baat bhi sahi hai, dono jaga tashih ki zaroorat hai. |
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