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RulesThis is a discussion on ~~Tumhari Ankhain Kehti hain~~ within the Poetry on Demand forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; Assalam u Alikum jinaboo wa janabaat .............. kehnay ko kuch nahi, pata nahi kay sa ha , may nay to ...
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#1
11-12-2007, 11:07 PM
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Assalam u Alikum jinaboo wa janabaat  .............. kehnay ko kuch nahi, pata nahi kay sa ha , may nay to bana dala ha ,  oh yes,1 baat  1, 1, 1 cheez khud hi ben gai ha , mayra irada to nahi tha but khud hi ban gaiager kisi nay Nice work kaha na ...........  PLZ kuch 4 harf say daza boliay ga, khiar... Mulahiza Fermain ab   maloom ha mujhy ap logon ko vo larkay ka dil acha nahi lagay ga  , but me ko mazay ka lag raha tah uu so uu hi laga diya baki kiya ajeeb lag-ing, sab bataiya ga 1.gif ")1") PLZ, bas 4 harf likh kr met jaan choraiya ga ,  may nay keh diya , baki ap logon ki marzi ab , ....  sab ka Rab Rakha 
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11-12-2007, 11:33 PM
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bohat acha image hai,, aur i like this poetry to....... overall good work
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11-13-2007, 01:03 AM
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Waha waha kiya baat hae.., kiya baat hae..?  Ghazal par kar aisa laga, jaisae kae manae "AALO-BAHARAE" ki Chattni kha li ho.  bohat acha image aur ghazal: |
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11-13-2007, 01:05 AM
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nice posting thanks
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11-13-2007, 03:47 AM
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typing main kuchh ghaltiya-n hui hai-n jaise, bholado............. .....yahan "bhula do" hoga "seekhlado"................" sikhlado" aur "aamawas" ..............should be "amawas" v . nice work Khush ji.................. .. |
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11-13-2007, 04:34 AM
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Ghazal bht achi hai, kuch imle ki ghalitian hain, bckgrned acha hai par text pe aur kaam hosakta tha 
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11-13-2007, 04:59 AM
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good show..............
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11-13-2007, 05:06 AM
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ek or image! lafz to me 4 se ziada hi bolon ga...itni tanqeed pehle hi ho chuki hia...lekin abhi gunjaish baqi hia... imlaa ki ghaltian bahut hain...text effect so so hai...overall image behter hia...per behtri ka mazeed gunjaish b bahut hia... Bahut haina itna!
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