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This is a discussion on " Sachey Sayeen Tere Dar Se Aas Bohot hai " within the Poetry on Demand forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; My Fav poem... plz issey koi bhi design kr dey... wo nam aankhoon se meri janib deakhhta hai, aur kehta ...
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02-18-2008, 03:46 PM
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My Fav poem... plz issey koi bhi design kr dey... wo nam aankhoon se meri janib deakhhta hai, aur kehta hai, khudara chhoar na jana, mujhey tum bhool na jana, mujhey tum maar dena pr, kabhi tanha nhi krna, k hum tum door ho jain, kabhi majboor ho jain, wo kehta hai, tumhey sun k main jeeta hon, tum hasti ho tou hasta hoon, tumhey mill k main dunya k, sabhi gham bhool jata hoon, mere b-e-rang jeevan ko, tumhi ne rang bakhshey hain, mujhey weraan mat krna, kabhi anjan na bn-na, hamesha sang hi rehna, kabhi b-e-rang mat krna, wo nam aankhoon se meri janib deakhhta hai, uss k lehjey ki udasi, aankhh ka gham, bheegi zubaan, mera dil rok deati hain, meri palkain bhigoti hain, main uss se kehna chahti hoon, meri aankhoon main bhi tou, dooryoon ka dard baqi hai, mujhey ehsaas hai, chahat bari saffak hoti hai, bohot barbad krti hai, tum itni shidatoon se mujhh ko na chaho, haan khuda se maangtey rehna, wo sohna sacha sayeen, hamarey rastoon main noor bhar de ga, sabhi mushkiloon ko door kr dey ga... Thanks In Advance....
__________________ * ! * Hamesha-Maangyey-Usi-Pak-Zat-Se-Jo-Kisi-Ki-Muhtaj-Naheen * ! * Bint_E_Adam Hoon Main Ibn_E_Adam Hy Too Last edited by Heart_Beat; 02-18-2008 at 03:48 PM.         |
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02-18-2008, 05:58 PM
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Riya ji ager ap ki ijazet ho or koi jaldi na ho to i want to make it 1.gif ")1")
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02-18-2008, 07:39 PM
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  imla daykh lo Riya, & plz let me know if u will find any mistake
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02-19-2008, 09:12 AM
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meri palkain BHIGOTI hain me YE izafi hai... wo SHOHNA sccha sayin me SHOHNA me seen, wao, hay, noon aur alf aye ga... |
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02-19-2008, 01:46 PM
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ok thank u so muchh....nhi jaldi bilkul b nhi thanks again...
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02-19-2008, 03:05 PM
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meri palkain BHIGOTI hain me YE izafi hai... wo SHOHNA sccha sayin me SHOHNA me seen, wao, hay, noon aur alf aye ga... haan yehi 2 mistakes hain jo maira ji ne batai hain .... aur aik tumhi word ki hai...uss main tey...meem...hey.... aur choti yey aayey gi.... tum itni sidatoon se mujh ko na chaho...iss main chaho k aakhir main noon ghunna izafi hai... baqi sab theek hai......
__________________ * ! * Hamesha-Maangyey-Usi-Pak-Zat-Se-Jo-Kisi-Ki-Muhtaj-Naheen * ! * Bint_E_Adam Hoon Main Ibn_E_Adam Hy Too Last edited by Heart_Beat; 02-19-2008 at 03:14 PM. |
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02-19-2008, 03:29 PM
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Maira & Riya, may nay yeah poem koi 10 baar perhi thi laykin apnay mood may hi perhti gai , galtioon ka ihsas hi nahi hoa, thanks to mention b4 i made it, inshAllah by day after tomorow or in 3 days u will get design of it 
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02-20-2008, 11:13 AM
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hi, abhi main issey phir se parhh rhi thi tou 2 mistakes aur nazar i hain.... tumhain sun kr main jeeta hoon...iss main tumhain ...tey,meem,hey,chot i yey,noon ghunna....ho ga.... aur issi tara.... tumhain mil k main dunya k.....iss main wohi tumhain wali mistake hai...tey,meem,hey,c hoti yey,noon ghunna ho ga.... aur merey khayal main abhi koi nhi hai....
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02-20-2008, 03:24 PM
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 .... may abhi post krnay aai thi Ria .... ab correction kr kay krti hoon 
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02-20-2008, 04:05 PM
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