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#11
03-08-2007, 12:49 PM
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Nice try .. 1.gif ")1")                  |
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#12
03-08-2007, 05:15 PM
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Nice attepmt, but text is not clear...
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03-08-2007, 06:43 PM
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 Noon Meem Rashid Sahib Ki Yeh Nazm Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Hay..Text Clear Nahi Hay Bas...
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03-09-2007, 01:30 AM
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First of all welcome to Hallagulla. Oh I was waiting for my request and did not know that you designed my request 2 days back coz for this Ankaboot promised me that he will compose it after a week and will rewrite the script as well. Thanks Imaan Ahmed for composing my request!!!!. Really a good attempt. Though you used the same text from the website which I refered to on Hallagulla and that text is not very well written even there are few mistakes as well but its really a marvellous effort.............. .. I am very happy to see my request in the designed format..........coz this is one of my all the time favourite poems.............. Carry on and keep working like this, really a good addition to Hallagulla designers team................ ....Bravo keep on working like this............ Hamaysha khush rahiyay ,Cheers, Junki. Last edited by junkifunki; 03-09-2007 at 01:36 AM. |
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03-09-2007, 04:30 PM
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Warm Welcome here janab........... bohat acha image hay... aik bat bataoun ke kahin say text utha kar copy karnay se behtar hay aap khud inpage par compose karlain.... is say image par kharab asar nahi parta...yahan rahain gi to mazeed bhi INSHALLAH seekhti rahain gi... yahan par aapki jis jis mistake ko point out kia jae us se hargiz dil bardashta mat hoye ga... kiun kay ghaltian batanay ka maqsad sirf or sirf islahi hota hay or kuch nahi .... hope so aap meri bat samajh rahi hain.... keep trying n sharing...waiting for ur next composition...
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#16
03-11-2007, 10:13 PM
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thanx aap sub ki ray ka |
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#17
03-11-2007, 10:20 PM
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aik choti si try thi ainda koshish karon gi acha kaam karney ka |
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03-11-2007, 10:25 PM
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lolzzz nahi dil bardashta to nahi hoye woh kiya na humari pehli try  thi na ainda koshish karen gay acha kam karney ki |
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