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#2
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| Wow..... Zabardast Irfan Bhai very nice design....... waisey ye Zaat Zaal se hota ha zey se nahi overall i like it. |
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#3
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| bahut umda, kalam aur colours. daikh ker dil khush ho jata hai. ZAAT albata Zaal se hota Zey se nahi, aur kaye jaga aap huroof ke neeche Zair chor gaye hain, Irfan bhae her koye Adeeb ya shaer tho nahi hota keh khud apni taraf se Zair zaber lagaye, kayee logon ko samajh nahi athi aur wo samajhte hain shayed kalam mein koye kami hai. shaer ke sath nainsafi ka dar hota hai. aur kuch zair bahut aham hote hain jin se alfaz ke maani badal jate hai aur wazan ka farq parta hai, jaise keh chaute sher mein : (Aya tha kaun dosh Baharey hayat per) ager bahar ke niche zair na ho jaise aap ne likha hai, tho bahar parha jaye ga, jis se jis se is misre ka wazan kafi kam ho jata hai baqi misron se aur zahir hai is se ghazal ya nazam mein jo lahen hota hai wo khatum ho jata hai. isi tarah chathe sher ke pehle misre mein: (Na aashna they lazatey sozey jiger se hum) lazat ke neeche zair aur soz ke neeche zair, ab ager koye shaeri se Naa Aashna ho tho us ne parhna (Na Aashna they LAZAT SOZ jiger se hum) jo naser hai nazam nahi aur us ne Shaer ke sath aap ko gali daini thi. lolz. maaf karna Irfan bhae mazaaq kar raha hon. infact itni lambi chauri taqreer ka maqsad sirf ye hai keh aik tho fauji hon aur aap ko pata hai keh fauji aur maulvi hazrat apus mein drame karke waise bhi logon ko bewaqoof bana rahe hain.lolz aur doosra ye keh mujhe umeed hai aap mind nahi karein ge is liye itna kuch likha waise tho aap ka kaam mashallah mujh nacheez se bahut aalaa aur umda hai, laikin insan bewaqoofon se bhi tho seekhta hai na kabhi kabhi. umeed hai aap naraaz nahi hon gey. |
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#4
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haan yaar bas yahi to meray sath masla hai k aik galti say meri sari mehnat zaya hojati hai... main is poetry ko design karnay main bohat mehnat ki thi aur daekhoo sari mehnat par pani phir gaya... |
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#5
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pehlay to app ka bohat bohat shukriya DS .. haan main janta hoo k zair aur zabar ki bohat hamiyat hoti hai is ghazal main bohat jaga zair laga na tha jo mani nay khud hi nahi lagaya woh is wajah shayad mera yah khayal tha k sab is ghazal ko ba asani samjh jayin gay ... aur main app bohat shukargozar hoon k app nay sari galtiyaon ko point out kia inshallah main nxet time kushi karoo ga k zair zabar wagera zaroor lagoon un ki apni jaga par ... main nay app ki kis baat ka bora yah mind nahi kiya hai .. aur umeed karta hoon app nay bhi meri kis baat ko mind nahi karin gay ...bohat bohat shukriay app ka .... khush rahain .... |
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#6
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| good work ..... ![]()
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#7
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| v nice ........ ![]()
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#8
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