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This is a discussion on Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil me Khayal ata Hai within the Poetry on Demand forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; ...
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| Nice Work Dear.......... But not 1 of ur best design. center paragraph ki pehli line main aik lafz samajh nahi aaaya " MEHW" .. urdu wala Mehw is hey sey nahi...... doosrey Hey sey hota hey..... Baqi aapka kaam acha hey. |
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| Good one, but imla ki kaafi ghaltyaaN hain, ek zabr ki zarb se teergee ko tairgee karr dya hai , begana k ooper hamza ata hai, neem baar ki jaga neem baaz hai (not sure) rest is fine ![]()
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| Sahi kaha Nadeem Bhai ney ..... bhai aap type karney k baad aik baar parh liya karain....... Showaon main bhi aik wow izafi hey. proof reading bohat zarooori Hoti hey Dear Brother |
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Thanks Bro. mehv wali ghalti samaj me a gai...proof reading to me karta hon...lekin ![]() kabhi kabhi ho jata hia... |
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Thanks Nadeem Bahi... ayenda khayal rakhon ga k in ghaltion ko na durhaon... |
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| Nice work ![]()
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| nice Poetry With Good Image Bro ..............
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