good one, but i think if in the first stenza, which is:
"ywa wraz ba she akhr pa jwand stomana
yao che de bewafa bal gharibi shi"
the second line would be more good if it would be like this:
"yao che de yaar bewafa bala gharibi shi"
and would you please explain the second stanza. I am not getting it [
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