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Old 04-26-2008, 08:50 AM
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Default Re: mohabat che sok yar na swali she

good one, but i think if in the first stenza, which is:

"ywa wraz ba she akhr pa jwand stomana

yao che de bewafa bal gharibi shi"

the second line would be more good if it would be like this:
"yao che de yaar bewafa bala gharibi shi"

and would you please explain the second stanza. I am not getting it []
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