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This is a discussion on Us Ki Galiyun Ki Khak Bana Dey Mujh Ko...(Must Read) within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein, Sula Dey Mujh Ko Jiss Trah Faaltu ...
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08-30-2007, 06:47 PM
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Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein, Sula Dey Mujh Ko Jiss Trah Faaltu Guldaan Parey Rehtey Hein Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Dey Mujh Ko Doobtey Doobtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun Akhri Baar Toh Sahil Sey Sada Dey Mujh Ko Main Tery Hijar Mein Chup Chap Na Mar JAoun Kahein Main Hun Saktey Mein, Kabhi Aaa Kar Rula Dey Mujh Ko Dekh Main Ho Gya Hun Badnaam Kitboun Ki Tarha Meri Tashheer Na Kar, Ab To Jala Dey Mujh Ko Roothna Tera, Meri Jaan Liye Jata HAi Aisey Naraz Na Ho, Hans K Dikha Dey Mujh Ko Log Kehtey Hein K Yeh Ishq Nigal Jata HAi Main Bhi Is Ishq Mein Aya Houn, Duaa De Mujh Ko Yahi Auqaat Hai Meri Teray Jeevan Mein Koi Kamzore Sa Lamha Houn, Bhula De Mujh Ko Aur Kuch Nahein Manga Meray MAlik Tujh Sey Us ki galiyun ki khak bana dey mujh ko............. Us ki galiyun ki khak bana dey mujh ko............. Us ki galiyun ki khak bana dey mujh ko............. |-aLwAyZ tHiNk PoZiTiVe-| UmaiR Here CeLL:0321-2998292         |
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08-30-2007, 07:52 PM
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wt's dat..why pplz write their own ph no at da last...dat was not a gud thing .. just post gud poetry..dat's all ..plz careful dis thing... |
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08-30-2007, 10:08 PM
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Im Agree llvlliss_chlak0 Anyway NiCe Saring............
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08-31-2007, 07:01 AM
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Very Nice 1.gif ")1") |
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08-31-2007, 08:01 AM
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BOhet KhOoob.............. ...
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09-01-2007, 05:44 PM
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wah, boht khob  .
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09-02-2007, 12:44 PM
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Bahaar k wo chaar din hamin udaas ker gay.. kahan gain wo mehfilin wo log sab kidhar gay dabi the dil ki aag tau hawa chali wo yaad ki khizan k phool ki tarhan hum fiza main bekhar gay wo chand raat ka saman wo hamsafar wo karvan nigah_o_dil k rasty sy aaj phir guzar gay. plz reply kese poem hai? |
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10-13-2007, 04:00 PM
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nice post!!!!!!!!!!!
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02-22-2008, 07:17 AM
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nice................ ....
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04-22-2008, 04:47 PM
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Nice Nazm. magar kuch ash'aar meN wazan toot raha hai, jaise "Dekh Main Ho Gya Hun Badnaam Kitboun Ki Tarha" meN "Hun" ziyada hai. "Us ki galiyun ki khak bana dey mujh ko" misra chota ho gaya hai. |
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