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Tum Rooth Jao Mujhse Aisa kabi Na kerna

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Tum Rooth Jao Mujhse Aisa kabi Na kerna
Main Aik Nazr Ko Tarsoon Aisa Kabhi NA kerna

Main Pooch Pooch Haroon So Sawal Ker K
Tum Kuch Jawab NA Do Aisa Kabhi na kerna


Mujhse hi Mil k Hansna Mujhse hi Mil k Rona
Mujhse bichar k Jee Lo Aisa Kabi naa kerna

Tum Chand Ban K Rehna Mein Dakhti Rhoongi
Ksi Roz Tum Na Niklo Aisa Kabi Na Kerna

Tum Chalay Jao Jab B Tu Dakhoon TumHara Rasta
Tum Loat K Na k Na Aao Aisa Kabi Na kerna

Tum payar ban k rhena Nafrat kabi na banna
Tum Mere Ho k Rehna Bas aisa hi Tum kerna




last shair mera hai agr koi galti ho to plz berdashit kar lijiy....
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lajawab g........
nice sharing....
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thanx dear...........:ange l1
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Tum Rooth Jao Mujhse Aisa kabi Na kerna
Main Aik Nazr Ko Tarsoon Aisa Kabhi NA kerna

Main Pooch Pooch Haroon So Sawal Ker K
Tum Kuch Jawab NA Do Aisa Kabhi na kerna


Mujhse hi Mil k Hansna Mujhse hi Mil k Rona
Mujhse bichar k Jee Lo Aisa Kabi naa kerna

Tum Chand Ban K Rehna Mein Dakhti Rhoongi
Ksi Roz Tum Na Niklo Aisa Kabi Na Kerna

Tum Chalay Jao Jab B Tu Dakhoon TumHara Rasta
Tum Loat K Na k Na Aao Aisa Kabi Na kerna


Tum Mere Ho K REHNA Bas aisa hi Tum kerna
Tum PAYAR ban K REHA Nafrt Kabi na bnna

last shair mera hai agr koi galti ho to plz berdashit kar lijiy....
excellent janab bohat khoob............... ...
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aap sabky khloos aor paiar ka shukria aap sab ne poetry psand ki eska b
aik bar phir shukrua............. ..
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Hi

I want to give you one advice but please don't mind. You really did a good effort but in all the other lines the word at the end is "karna", but in your line is "banna". That would sound better and will make your poetry more attractive if you keep the same word at the end.

Hope you didn't mind.
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