Urdu Poetry Forum

koi kaisey yah bataey wo tanha kio hai
wo jo apna tha wo kisi ka kio hai
yahi dunya hai tou aisy hi dunya kio hai
yahi hota hai tou aisey hi hota kio hai
ek zara haath barhadein tou pakarlein daman
un kei sseenei mei samajayein ban kei dharkan
itni qurbat hai tou phir fasla itna kio hai
dil e barbaad sei nikla nahi ab tak koi
ek lutey gher mei diya karta hai dastak koi
aas jo toot gai phir sei banhata kio hai
tum masarrat ka kaho isey ya gham karishta
kahtey hai pyaar ka rishta hai janam ka rishta
hai janam ka yah rishta tou badalta kio hai?.......

perfect /good

par ji kon badal gaya

ek zara haath barhadein tou pakarlein daman
un kei sseenei mei samajayein ban kei dharkan
itni qurbat hai tou phir fasla itna kio hai



/good


behtreen heyy

yeh gazal sunney ka apna hi maza hey



/cig

ji sahi kah sab nei aur aanchl ji aap kei lia kuch aur hai hamrei dil meiwo yah sab kei samnei thori kahein gei

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kiya hay ji :@ /angry /hammer

sab batadoooo /narayna

batana tu parega janab /narayna /khabardar

/good @};-