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RulesThis is a discussion on ,,,,,,,,,Takmeel,,,, ,,,,, within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Takmeel Sari cheezain he Namukamil hain Kuch b poora nahi hai paas mere Namukamil hai rutjagoon ka safer Khawb b ...
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05-05-2008, 04:17 PM
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Takmeel Sari cheezain he Namukamil hain Kuch b poora nahi hai paas mere Namukamil hai rutjagoon ka safer Khawb b hain sabhi adhuray Or t,khayul ki wadyoon main kahin Chend ghazlain bhatekty rehty hain Jo pohanchti nahi hain kaghaz per Or ager ye pohanch bi jaien to Poora hota nahi hai shair koi Chend Nazmain bhi hain adhoory jo Zehan main aa k lout jaty hain jaisay Mayoos ki DUWA koi Dil se niklay falak se tukraye or phir be-aser hi lout aye Kuch bhi poora nahi hai paas mere Sare jazbay hi namukamil hain Barkha dhoondhanay ki koshish ki kho gaya apna aap janay kahan Hum ne dhoondha yahan wahan hud ko Khowj aye kahan kahan hud ko mil na paya mager suragh koi Safr-e-Ag,hy adoora hai Mera seb kuch abhi adhoora hai Kuch bhi poora nahi hai paas mere Sare waday hi namukamil hain Kuch kitabain k jin ko perhna tha wo bhi ab tek younhi pary hain kahin Sirf do char hi waraq paltay Dil ko phir yea khayal anay laga Sare safhoon ko chod doon aisay Zindagi k tamam rishtoon ko Q na chup chap tod doon aisay Kuch bhi poora nahi hai paas mere                  |
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05-05-2008, 06:23 PM
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buhat umdaaaaaaaa
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05-05-2008, 08:26 PM
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عمدہ شاعری،بہت خُوب۔ خُوش رھیں (آمین
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