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Takda jedha rehnda si

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Old 12-22-2006, 01:45 PM
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Default Takda jedha rehnda si

Takda jedha rehnda si
oh meino takda rhenda si
guadian da munda
apne khiyalan ich gawacha
khawre ki labdha rehnda si
jithey vi mein jaawan
us toon luk nah pawan
tandoori te roti landian
ya chule agg balaindian
kapde dhondi howan
ya mein waal apne sukhandi howan
oh aas paas rehnda wang parchawan
akhan ich ohdey sawal si
banda oh vi kamal si
muhno oh kujh nah kehnda si
bas tik tik takda rehnda si .
vailey noon khab lag gay
assan vi apni sochan ich pe gay
kadi kadi uss da khiyal vi awanda si
keh iss munde noon ki hoya
gawachiya rehnda hey
te meinoo takda rehnda ey
pata te lage ki chahnda ey
sochan sochn ich kai varhey lang gae
assan apne aap tun vi sangan lag pae
kadi kadi mein vi sochdi saan
takda oh meino rahway
mein kiun eh chawndi aan
mere kol te iss da koi jawab nahein si
kadi kita apne naal vi hisab nahin si
ik din akhan merian meinh varsaiya
dooje din meri doli jani si te
mein pehli war usnoo kol bulaya
us noon keha kal mein chali jawangi
bit bit takdian us di akhon do hanjo digge
mein hanju poojhdiya hoiya kehiya tu kiun ronda ein
mein kujh dinna baad fir awangi.
tak ke meino oh hassiya
kadi tussi takiya hoey
akhon jehda roe
mehon hassiya hoey
ohdey hanjo te oh hassa
meri samjh ich nahein si aaya.
mein khud rondi saan
ki deindi us noon dilasa
doli chaddhiya mein unhon si labhiya
meino te ass paas oh nahein si disiya
ajje vi mein sochdi aan
jande vari uss kamle ne
mar jaane jeun joge nein
meino kiun nahein si takiya
varhey lang gay ajje vi dil ich mein rakhiya
meino jandi vari kiu nahein si uss ne takiya.
jehdha har vele takda meino rehnda si
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mein ik navi tarz di nazm likhan di try keeti ey . pata nahein tussi
pasand karo gey ya nahein per eh gal sachi ey .khiyal aaya ajj likh hi
daan . ik bhaar hi leh jaao dil tun.
khush raho tussi sare jii
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bohat he umda intekhab hai.
keep sharing.
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nice................ .................... ....
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very nice..
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maiN noo na aasaan dii punjaabii nahiiN aandii... mushkilaaN dii aandii...is vaastan maiN noo samajh naii aandii itthe aasaan waali punjaabii naal te. zaraa koi translation to kittaa...sorry...mai N noo di punjaabii mushkil hondi

nazam achchhi lagan dii amiN noo kuRiye...maiN kuuRaa hondaa pata aite sii?
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bohat khooooooooooooob
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Default Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

very nice poem aanj lagda se jinway sara kuj samnay hondaa peya way.
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Default Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

bahut bahut shukriya aplogon ki hosla afzai ka .
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