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This is a discussion on polling: Nazam contest of NOvember 07 within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Asalam O Alikum Aj nazam contets ki polling start ho raye haii So ap ko jo nazam achii lagya usay ...
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| 1 |     | 1 | 2.38% |
| 2 |    | 4 | 9.52% |
| 3 |    | 9 | 21.43% |
| 4 |    | 6 | 14.29% |
| 5 |    | 9 | 21.43% |
| 6 |    | 3 | 7.14% |
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| 14 | | 1 | 2.38% |
| 15 | | 3 | 7.14% |
| 16 | | 1 | 2.38% |
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#1
11-23-2007, 08:01 AM
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Asalam O Alikum  Aj nazam contets ki polling start ho raye haii So ap ko jo nazam achii lagya usay vote karain voting ki last date 30 November haii Regards SOS MODS        |
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#2
11-23-2007, 08:23 AM
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1 ~~ Faisal Husain mujhe tum nazar se giraa to rahe ho mujhe tum kabhii bhii bhulaa naa sakoge na jaane mujhe kyuu.N yaqii.n ho chalaa hai merii yaad ko tum miTaa naa sakoge merii yaad hogii jidhar jaaoge tum kabhii naGmaa ban ke, kabhii ban ke aa.Nsuu taD.apataa mujhe har taraf paaoge tum shamaa jo jalaayii merii vafaa ne bujhaanaa bhii chaaho bujhaa naa sakoge kaabhii naam baato.n me.n aayaa jo meraa to bechain ho hoke dil thaam loge nigaaho.n pe chhaayegaa Gam kaa a.ndheraa kisii ne jo puuchhaa sabab aa.Nsuo.n kaa bataanaa bhii chaaho bataa naa sakoge 2~~jiya ji Suna hoga bohat tum ne... kahiN aankhoN ki rim jhim ka kahin palkoN ki shabnam ka parha hoga bohat tumne.... kahiN lehjay ki barish ka .....kahiN sagar ke aansoo ka magar tum ne kabhi humdam...kahin daikhay kahin parkhay kisi tehreer ke aansoo mujhe teri judaai ne... yehi mairaaj bakhshi hai ke main jo lafz likhta hoN....woh saray lafz rotay hain ke main jo harf bunta hoN...woh saray bain kartay hain mere sang is judaai main...mere alfaz martay hain sabhi tareef kartay hain...meri tehreer ki lekin.. kabhi koi nahin sunta...mere alfaz ki siski falak bhi jo hila daalay.. mere lafzoN main hain shamil...usi taseer ke aansoo kabhi daikho mere humdam meri tehreer ke aansoo .. 3~~ pariareeba  4~ ~*pari*~ Boht socha,mohabbat main Tumhen main tohfa kaisa don Jo teri aankhon jaisa ho Sada aayi mere dil se Ye tum jo harf likhte ho Zamane bhar se bhari hain Zamane bhar se sunder hain bigho ker aansoo'un se tum Usey tohfe main de daalo!!! 5 ~~ saya-e-yazdan Subha ki thandak main Pholon ki shabnam main Din ke ujaley main Chand ke haley main Sham ki shehnai main Rat ki tanhai main Doston ke jhameley main Aur beth ke akeley main Main ne dhonda saber-o-qarar Khushion ke mosam main Aanson ke aalam main Dosron ki baton main Beechen raton main Doston ki qurbat main Apno ki mohabat main Chand ki chandni main Aur phir agahi main Main ne dhonda saber-o-qarar Chen se na soi main Din rat roi main Haqeqat hoi mugh pey zahir Aur mil gya mugh ko aakhir Merey dil ka saber-o-qarar Meri duaon mian Sari iltajaon main Sadgi ebadat main Rab sr mohabat main Aur phir koi dukh koi azaab Koi ranj na raha is khushi ke bad Merey Khaliq merey Malik Merey Allah se dosti ke bad! 6 ~~ pices KITAB E MAZI bOHET HI MUDET KAY BAD KAL JAB.... KITAB E MAZI KO MAIN NAY KHOLA.... BOHET SAY CHAHRY NAZER MAIN OTRY... BOHET SAY NAMOO P DIL TARPA.... AIK ASA SAFHA BHI OS MAIN AYA.... LIKHA HOWA THA JO ANSOON SAY... KAY JIS KA ANWAN THA HUMSAFER... YAH SAFHA SAB SAY HI MOATABER THA... KUCH OR ANSOO PIR OS P TAPKY... PIR OS SAY AGY MAIN PARH NA PAYA... KITAB E MAZI KO BAND KER KAY... OSI KI YADOON MAIN KHO GAYA MAIN... AGER WOH MILTA TO KASA HOTA... UNHE KHAYALOON MAIN KHO GAYA MAIN.. 7 ~~ faridnawaz Ansoo Q Nahi Ruktey Mere Dard Q Nahi Kam Hota Mera Ansuon Ki Barish Main Q Doobi Rehti Hoon Tanhai Main Q Roti Rehti Hoon Na Jeeti Hoon Na Marti Hoon Us Ki Yaadon Main Roti Rehti Hoon Pata Hai Woh Kabhi Nahi Miley Ga Mujhe Phir Bhi Us Ka Intazar Rehta Hai Mujhe Ansuoon Ki Barish Main Chor Kar Q Chala Jata Hai Jis Par Yaqeen Karti Hoon Wohi Q Deta Hai Dhoka Jisey Apna Kehti Hoon Woh Mujhe Apna Q Nahi Samjhta Har Koi Ata Hai Ek Naya Ghum Dey Kar Q Chala Jata Hai Mujhe Ansoon Q Nahi Ruktey Merey Dard Q Nahi Kam Hota Mera 8 ~~ autam sach main ye meree khwahish thee tumharee ankhon se girte har ansoo ko honthon se chunta main taron ko chandnee main piro kar tumahree raton ke liye sapne bunta main bar bar kahata tum se tum meree sanson ka hissa ho meree zindgee kee zimmedaree ho tum main har khushee mujhe uganee hai tum mera khet ho meree kyaree ho ye meree khwashih to thee par ye haq tum ne mujhe nahee diya aur aisa nahee ke kisee ek pal ko mujhe pyar nahee kiya pyar to kiya par pyar ko pahare main rakh diya tum ne apne har sapne ko anchal se dhak diya tum mere tumahre beech ka fsala parhtee raheen tum pyar karane se har pal dartee raheen sach to ye hai pyar mujh main bhee uga hai tum main bhee kaheen hai fasala to bas kagaz pe hai ye fasala to fasala bhee nahee hai aur ham ek kaghaz ka fasala nibhaye jate hain par ye bhee sach hai tumahre ansoo meree ankhon main paye jate hain zindgee ke baad bhee zindgee atee hai us zindgee main nzadeekiyan itnee bharoonga ke har dard mang sakoon tuamhree ek raat kee neend ke liye hazar hazar rat jag sakoon subah tum jano ki mere god main sar rakh ke tum rat bhar sotee rahee ho subah tum jano main tumhara hee to hoon phir kyon rat rat bahr rotee rahee ho ye sab magar aglee zindgee kee baten hain ane wale kal kee rate hain aj jo bhee hai khwahish hai kahanee hai ham door hai ham jante hain isee liye meree ankh bheegee hai teree ankh main panee hai 9 ~~ Jaana Tanhaiyaan bhi naa Mayassarki hum jee bhar ke role Manale gum thora sa ,ke ANSOO Bar bar ke role ANSOO jo bahe sar-e-rah ,kaise hum unhain chupayain Naraz hain tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ANSOON ko manaye Beh jo gaye to mushkil ho ga duniya ko samjhana Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir to aye ANSOON Zaroor Aana Lekin hai pabandi in ANSOON pe ki aise he na chale aana Zaara tadapne dena humare Jazboon ko tab hai tumhain Aana Chalo aye shayar ab nikle hum dhondhne Tanhai k ab role Manale gum thora sa ,ke ANSOO Bhar bhar ke role 10 ~~ dashingasad kia mila muhabbat say khwab ki musafat say vasl ki tamazat say rozo shab ke riyazat say kia mila muhabbat say ek hijer ka sehra ek sham yadoon ki ek thaka hua ANSOO!! 11 ~~ smumair10 Aik mohabbat main nay ki hai Aik mohabbat main nay ki hai roshan aankhein ujly ansoo tery piyar ko daan kiye hai chahat k ahsaas tumhary naam kiye hai neendain di hai khwab buny hai ruswaye ko naam kia hai apni zaat pe daag sahy hai suchy jazbon wali mohabbat tery zaat per sadqy ki hai raar raat bhar jaag k kitni nam aanjhon say duain ki hai aik mohabbat main nay ki hai......! aik mohabbat tumny ki hai.....! aisi thos aur aisi bebasi jis per dil ka har har ansoo pani ki tarha bah jaye mery under sholy jalain aur uski ana per aanch na aaye banjar jazby,patther aankhain yeh jazbon ki dolat di hai AIK MOHABBAT TUMNAY KI HAI 11 ~~ Dr.R.N.Shrivastava Maine dekhi hai abhi pyar ki pahli manzil mujhpe aansoo na bahayeN dar-o-diwar abhi MaiN nayii chot bhii sahlooNga khuloose dil se Mera ahsaas nahiiN dard se bezaar abhii jabte-fugaaN se gii ko jalaataa raha huuN maiN Khud apne ghar ko aag lagata raha huuN maiN AshkooN ki aaNch se mujhe milta raha sukuuN SholooN se dil ki pyas bujhata raha huuN maiN Umiid aur vo bhii havadis kii god maiN Ik shamma aandhiyoN meN jalata raha huuN maiN Taqmiile-justjuu ka na aaya kabhii yakiiN Manzil se laut-laut ke aata raha huuN maiN Aksar uubal padi hai meri oak se shrab YuuN bhii dua ko hath uthata raha huuN maiN 13 ~~ Stubborn Lioness! Jub raat ki naagun dasti hai Nas nas meiN zehr utarta hai Jub chaand ki kirneiN tezi sey Is dil ko cheer k aati haiN Jub aankh k andar hi aansu ZanjeeroN meiN bundh jaatey haiN Sub jazboN per chaa jatey ho Tub yaad boht tum aatey ho Jub dard ki jhanjar bajti hai Jub raqs ghamoN ka hota hai KhuwaboN ki taal pey saarey dukh Wehshat k saaz bajatey haiN Gaatey haiN khuwahish ki lay meiN Masti mein jhoomtey jaatey haiN Sub jazboN per chaa jatey ho Tub yaad boht tum aatey ho Tub yaad boht tum aatey ho 14 ~~ umeed-e-seher duniya dard na janey Ammdi dil se door daraz dil se door daraz basey hai duniya door daraz ANSOO lahoo mey ghulmil jaein seena sissak sissak sehlaein aahein be-awaz door door tak ru'h mey gunjein khamooshi k saaz janey kis nuktey pe ja kar khuley ghamon ka raaz abhi to hai aaghaz ni Ammdi abhi to hai aaghaz duniya dard na janey Ammdi dil se door daraz 15 ~~ hamzaduaa ۔’’ سُنیئے ‘‘ اپنی خوبصورت کلائی میں ...بڑے چاؤ سے چوڑیاں گھماتے ہوئے اُس نے کہا ’’ یہ چوڑیاں دیکھئے ..........کیسی ہیں؟‘‘ آپ کو پسند ہیں؟ یہ آپ کے نام کی ہیں .........ہم نے آپ کی طرف سے لی ہیں آپ ہمارے ہو ناں؟ ہو نا آپ ہمارے؟ اس سے پہلے کے .......میری آنکھ میں چمکتے آنسو دیکھتی جلدی سے میں نے کہا ’’ ہاں بہت خوبصورت ہیں یہ چوڑیاں تمھاری کلائی میں بہت سج رہی ہیں ‘‘ میرے نام کی دعویدار وہ پیاری معصوم لڑکی خوشی سے مُسکرا دی .....اور بھول گئی اپنے سوال کا جواب 16 ~~ umer-rajput@hotmail.com MERAY KHAWAB , MERI KAHANIYAN MERAY BE-KHABAR TUJHEY KYA PATA TERI ARZOOUN KAY DOSH PAR TERI KAIFIYAT KAY JAAM MEIN TERAY NAQSH MEIN , TERAY NAAM MEIN MERAY KHAWAB , MERI KAHANIYAN MERAY ZAICHAY , MERAY RASTAY MERAY LAIKH KI YEH NISHANIYAN TERI CHAH MEIN HEIN RUKI HUIN KABHI ANSOUN KI KITAR MEIN KABHI PATHROON KAY HISAR MEIN KABHI DASHT-E-HIJAR KI RAAT MEIN KABHI BADNASEEBI KI GHAAT MEIN KAI RANG DHOOP SAY JAL GAY KAI CHAND SHAKH SAY DHAL GAY KAI TAN SULGH KAY PIGHAL GAY TERI ULFATOON KAY QAYAM MEIN TERAY DARD KAY DAROOBAM MEIN KOI KAB SAY SABT-E-SALEEB HAI TERI KAIYNAT KI RAAT MEIN TERI AZDAHAM KI SHAM MEIN TUJHEY KYA KHABAR , MERAY BE-KHABAR |
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#3
11-23-2007, 08:57 AM
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Voted... And best wishes for all the participants
__________________ Mohabbat Karney Waley Kam Naa Hon Gay  |
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11-24-2007, 01:34 PM
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voted............... ............
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polling: Nazam contest of NOvember 07 
