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jo tum mujhko yun tanha chhor kar chale gaye

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Old 11-15-2007, 09:48 AM
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yeh Jheel ka pani
aaj bhi waisa hi hai
yeh wadiyan aaj bhi
waisi hari bhari hain

woh dharakhten
abhi tak wahin qayam hain

woh samandar ki lahren
abhi bhi wahin tak aati hain
jaisa tum
in sabko chhor kar gaye they


woh mehfil aaj bhi
waise hi adhuri hai
jaise tum chhor kar gaye they

woh jheel ka pani
woh wadiyon ki raunak
woh darakhton ke patte
woh samandar ki lahren
aur woh adhuri mehfil

is sab mein se
kuchh bhi nahi badla hai
par main bahut hi badal gaya hoon

tum bin tanhaiyon mein
rahna seekh gaya hoon
tumahri yaadon ke sahare
jeena seekh gaya hoon

main roz un jaghon par
is ummeed se jata hoon
ki shayad
tum mujhe kahin mul jao

jahan par humne
pahron pyar ki baatein ki thi
jahan par humne
aane wale kal ke
sunahre sapne dekhe they
jahan par humne
tumhare liye mehfil sajayi thi
jahan par humne
aane wale kal ke sunahre sapney dekhe they
jaha par tumne
mujhse kabhi na bichadne ka wada kiya tha
jahan par tumne mujhse
koi bhi ghum na chhupane ki qasmein khayi thin
jahan par humne
har khushi baantne ka faisla kiya tha

woh sari baatein
woh sari qasmein
woh sare wade
aur woh sare khawab
na jane kahan ghum ho gaye hain

tumhare samne
na jane kaun si manzil aa gayi thi woh
jo tumne
mujhse yun bichhharne ka faisla
tanha hi kar liya tha
aur mujhe
chhor diya tha yahan
bin kiya gunah ki saza uthane ko

shayad hi ab koi waqt aaye
jab tum usi mod par
wapas aao
jis mod par tum
mujhe tanha chhor kar gaye they

aur phir mujhe batao
ki woh kaun si manzil thi
jo tum mujhko
yun tanha chhor kar
chale gaye they



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Old 11-15-2007, 10:42 AM
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hmmmm daal main kuch kala hai............
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very nice, keep sharing with us
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yeh Jheel ka pani

aaj bhi waisa hi hai
yeh wadiyan aaj bhi
waisi hari bhari hain

woh dharakhten
abhi tak wahin qayam hain

woh samandar ki lahren
abhi bhi wahin tak aati hain
jaisa tum
in sabko chhor kar gaye they


woh mehfil aaj bhi
waise hi adhuri hai
jaise tum chhor kar gaye they

woh jheel ka pani
woh wadiyon ki raunak
woh darakhton ke patte
woh samandar ki lahren
aur woh adhuri mehfil

is sab mein se
kuchh bhi nahi badla hai
par main bahut hi badal gaya hoon

tum bin tanhaiyon mein
rahna seekh gaya hoon
tumahri yaadon ke sahare
jeena seekh gaya hoon

main roz un jaghon par
is ummeed se jata hoon
ki shayad
tum mujhe kahin mul jao

jahan par humne
pahron pyar ki baatein ki thi
jahan par humne
aane wale kal ke
sunahre sapne dekhe they
jahan par humne
tumhare liye mehfil sajayi thi
jahan par humne
aane wale kal ke sunahre sapney dekhe they
jaha par tumne
mujhse kabhi na bichadne ka wada kiya tha
jahan par tumne mujhse
koi bhi ghum na chhupane ki qasmein khayi thin
jahan par humne
har khushi baantne ka faisla kiya tha

woh sari baatein
woh sari qasmein
woh sare wade
aur woh sare khawab
na jane kahan ghum ho gaye hain

tumhare samne
na jane kaun si manzil aa gayi thi woh
jo tumne
mujhse yun bichhharne ka faisla
tanha hi kar liya tha
aur mujhe
chhor diya tha yahan
bin kiya gunah ki saza uthane ko

shayad hi ab koi waqt aaye
jab tum usi mod par
wapas aao
jis mod par tum
mujhe tanha chhor kar gaye they

aur phir mujhe batao
ki woh kaun si manzil thi
jo tum mujhko
yun tanha chhor kar
chale gaye they




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hmmmmmmmmm
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are yeh pasand nahi aayi to koi baatnahi main dusri nazm likh deta hoon ya koi ghazal likh deta hoon theek hai na, lekin apna sir deewar par nahi mere dil par mar do bas uar thappad khane mein koi burai nahi hai jab tumse mar khani ho to
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itni buri sharing be nahi hai.........

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Beautiful sharing.........
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achi nazam hai...........
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