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This is a discussion on Iss nazm ko unwaan kya do gay?? within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Kabhi fursat mein aao to meri ek nazm se milna Magar iss nazm ka dhaaga Tumhaari yaad ka lehja badalte ...
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#1
04-09-2008, 09:19 PM
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Kabhi fursat mein aao to meri ek nazm se milna Magar iss nazm ka dhaaga Tumhaari yaad ka lehja badalte hi na jaane kyun ulajh kar TooT jata hai Tabhi to iss ki satrain ja ba ja bikhri huwi hain Koi takye ki shiknon me buhat TooTi huwi Neendon ki ankhon main pari hai Koi dehleez par ahaT ki baali kaan me daalay khari hai Koi rukhsaar pay aansoo ki soorat jum gayi hai Koi dil se labon tak aate aate tham gayi hai Koi bookshelf me bechain haatho se uTha kar Bin parhay rakhi kitabon me pari hai Koi ehsaas ki ankhon me kankar ki tarah atki hui hai Koi uss udh jaley cigarette me lipti reh gayi hai Jisse jaane ki jaldi me piye bin ashtray me tum ne chota tha Ziyan ki dhool ban kar paon se lipti hain kuch satrein Kahin ek satr ke andar shikasta maan se bheegi huwi palkein pari hain Kahin ek satr me wo chaand atka hai Meray kamre ki khiRki se jisse tum dekh kar Sheeshe se uljha choR aaye thay Koi ek satr uss chaaye ki pyaali me pari ho gi Piye jaane ke khaahish me jo table par hi rakhi reh gayi thi Kahin ek satr me khaabon ka wo rasta bhi rakha hai Main jiss par apni aankhein bhool aayi hoon Kahin ek satr ke andar meri wo saans rakhi hai Tumhaari be nishan masroofiyat ke bojh se Jiss ko main ab tak ji nahi paayi Koi ek satr shayed Daakiye ki cycle ki chain me uljhi huwi hai Tumhaara khat liye bin iss saRak par kyun wo aata hai ??? Zara sa ghor se sunna Receiver me tumhaare phone ke shayed meri awaz rakhi ho Issay ab parcel kar do to main iss se bhi kuch Bheegi huwi satrain bana loon gi Abhi dil ki hathaili par bhi kuch satrein pari hain Buhat nazuk hain , lafzon se chhuwa to TooT jaein gi Koi in muntazir ankhon me rakhi hai Jinhe tum apna keh kar bhool jaatay ho Yahin ek satr ki ankhon me mera khaab rakha tha Tumhaari berukhi ke paon se kuchla para hai Mere iss khaab ka tawan kya do gay?? Suno! Iss nazm ko unwaan kya do gay??         |
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#2
04-09-2008, 09:30 PM
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Buhat hi umdaa bhai..
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#3
04-09-2008, 09:44 PM
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shukriya butt sahib |
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04-09-2008, 10:28 PM
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thanks to like it |
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#6
04-09-2008, 11:21 PM
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Bohat Khoooob........
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04-10-2008, 06:51 AM
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Bohat khoob............. |
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#9
04-10-2008, 11:12 AM
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 Bohot Behatreen   |
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#10
04-11-2008, 01:05 PM
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kya baat hai jawadi bhai....... itna behtareen kalam ab tak chhupa kar kyon rakha tha...... bohot zabardast........... . I really like it.
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