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This is a discussion on Aiy door nagar k banjaray within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Aiy door nagar k banjaray, kioun aaj safar ki thaani hai yeh barish, keechar, sard hawa or rah kathin anjaani ...
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#1
01-02-2008, 06:32 PM
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Aiy door nagar k banjaray, kioun aaj safar ki thaani hai yeh barish, keechar, sard hawa or rah kathin anjaani hai aa mehfil chup chup bhethi hai, Aa mehfil ka jee shad karain wo log k teray aashiq hain, kay roz say tujh ko yaad karain Wo thor thikanay dhoond chukay, wo manzil manzil chhoo aay Ab aas lagaey bethay hain, kab dastak ho kab tu aaey aey door nagar key banjarey ghar choor key aesay jana tha kiyon chah ki raah dikhai thi kiyon piyar ka hath berhaya tha hey duniya key hangamon main rangeeni bhi ra'nai bhi her cheez yahan per piyari hey mehromi bhi - ruswai bhi sab loog yahan per qismat key bey toor thapeerey khatey hain jeetey hain aur jeetey rehney ki ik aas sey chimtey jatey hain aur to to aik khilari tha kiyon khel sey mon hi moor liya kiyon jaan ki bazi haar gaya kiyon umr ka rishta toor liya ghar janey key mushtaq yahan ham jesay lakh becharey hon wo loog hi rukhsat hutey hein ju loog sabhi ku piyarey hon      |
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#2
01-02-2008, 06:46 PM
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Aiy door nagar k banjaray, kioun aaj safar ki thaani hai yeh barish, keechar, sard hawa or rah kathin anjaani hai aa mehfil chup chup bhethi hai, Aa mehfil ka jee shad karain wo log k teray aashiq hain, kay roz say tujh ko yaad karain Wo thor thikanay dhoond chukay, wo manzil manzil chhoo aay Ab aas lagaey bethay hain, kab dastak ho kab tu aaey aey door nagar key banjarey ghar choor key aesay jana tha kiyon chah ki raah dikhai thi kiyon piyar ka hath berhaya tha hey duniya key hangamon main rangeeni bhi ra'nai bhi her cheez yahan per piyari hey mehromi bhi - ruswai bhi sab loog yahan per qismat key bey toor thapeerey khatey hain jeetey hain aur jeetey rehney ki ik aas sey chimtey jatey hain aur to to aik khilari tha kiyon khel sey mon hi moor liya kiyon jaan ki bazi haar gaya kiyon umr ka rishta toor liya ghar janey key mushtaq yahan ham jesay lakh becharey hon wo loog hi rukhsat hutey hein ju loog sabhi ku piyarey hon |
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#3
01-02-2008, 06:55 PM
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bohat khub akhari line app ne bilkul sahi kahi hai.............sab ke lea dua |
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01-02-2008, 07:13 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Jnab! acha intkhab hy aap ka, mager urdu poets club meiN sirf apna kalaam share kiya jata hy. dusry shairoN k klaam se intkhaab share krny k liay aik alag section hy, maiN aap ki nazm wahaN move kr raha huN...
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01-02-2008, 09:10 PM
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very nice... keep it up
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01-03-2008, 01:05 AM
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v nice................ .....
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