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Old 05-16-2008, 11:37 AM
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Originally Posted by Ankaboot View Post
AssalamoAlaikum,
Please next time do not post a Nazm in Ashaar section.
Thank You.


Ankaboot.


Dear Ankaboot,


aap kisi ek hisse ko puri nazm nahi kah sakte hain,

parveen shakir ji ki likhi hui nazm ke ek hisse ko aap ashaar hi mane to durust hoga.

ise aap nazm nahi kah sakte hain, kyonki yeh nazm ki shara'ton ko puri nahi karti hai
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