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Originally Posted by Bigb  Hi
I want to give you one advice but please don't mind. You really did a good effort but in all the other lines the word at the end is "karna", but in your line is "banna". That would sound better and will make your poetry more attractive if you keep the same word at the end.
Hope you didn't mind. |
tanx so much aapki advoice ka b bohut shukria mujy khushi hogi k meri mistake ka mujy ahsas dilaya jay aap aik bar phir poetry dekhy kia khyal hai ab theek hai.......