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This is a discussion on Jaun saab within the Mushaira forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; salam 2 all, kuch ghazlein aur nzmein Jaun Elia ki main ne record ki hain, un mein se chand aap ...
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07-05-2008, 03:41 PM
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salam 2 all, kuch ghazlein aur nzmein Jaun Elia ki main ne record ki hain, un mein se chand aap ki khidmat mein pesh kar raha hun. shayad kisi laayeq hon.
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07-06-2008, 10:53 AM
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07-08-2008, 03:41 PM
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achi koshish hai par lehja dagmagaya hai kaii jaghon par shurwaat main halka lehja rakhen aakhir main jaake thora buland karen awaz andar se laayen narmahat se sunane ki koshish karen aur zara sa fast mujhe laga bohat slow tha shuru main aagay jaake kuch ziada hi fast hogaya shayad... khair overall achi koshish hai
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07-08-2008, 03:42 PM
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good................ ........nice sharing......
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07-08-2008, 03:47 PM
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thank u specially for picking out the faults. good help |
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