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This is a discussion on ~!~ Youn hi sochti hoon main aksar ... ~!~ within the Mohabat Kadah forums, part of the Mouj Masti category; dostoun .... aaj main pehli dafa apni likhi hui poetry Hg per share karney ja rahi hoon ..... umeed hai ...
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#1
08-02-2007, 02:31 PM
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 dostoun ....  aaj main pehli dafa apni likhi hui poetry Hg per share karney ja rahi hoon .....  umeed hai k aap meri hosla afzai k saath saath  meri galtiyoun per bhi roshni daalein gey ..... shukriyaa  Youn hi sochti hoon main aksar Tujhey kis tarhaan saza doun main Teri arzoo karoun aur phir tera khayal tak bhulla doun main Tujh ko khuwaboun main apney bula kar apni raatein sabhi jala doun main Teri manzil ko guloun sey saja kar rah main kaantey bicha doun main Ya teri zeest ka har ik pehloo bhooli hui dastaan bana doun main Tu jo chahey ussey main pa loun tu jo paa ley ussey mita doun main Ya tujhey iss tarhaan sey chahoun key tujh ko teri nazroun main hi gira doun main ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~  plzzzzzz meri isslaah zaroor kijiyee ga ..... shukriyaa 
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08-02-2007, 03:24 PM
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Yaar Tum Kamaal Ka Likhti Ho Behtareen Igni Bohat Umda Bohat Hi Aala
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08-02-2007, 03:57 PM
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bohat he khoob.........loved it and plz keep on sharing ur work...waitting to see more of ur awsome work
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08-02-2007, 04:21 PM
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AWESOME dear itna acha likha hai k cant describe really bohat hi zabardast hai  keep sharing
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08-02-2007, 05:45 PM
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ahann v nice igni agar yeh apki apni kavish ha to ap isay pclub mai post keray waha apko kafi help b milay gi regards shazlayhasan
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08-02-2007, 07:09 PM
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wowwwwwwwwwwww...... .its superb......itna acha likha es mein to kisi islaah ki zaroorat hi nahi hai....its perfect...and beautiful...such mein yaar bohut hi acha likha hai 
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08-02-2007, 07:27 PM
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very very very nice ..... you have worked very good .... or islah koi or nahi kerey ga ... jitna likho ge aap ... utna he aapki islaah ho gi aapki apni writing se 1.gif ")1") keep up the good work ... best of luck
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08-02-2007, 07:33 PM
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Thnxz a lot ..... meri likhi hui poem ki koi itni tareef karey ga mainey socha nahin tha ..... thnxz once agin 
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08-02-2007, 07:35 PM
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Thnxz ... mainey nahin socha tha k meri itni rokhi sokhi poetry kisi ko bhi pasand aaye gii  ... but i ll try to share sum more 
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08-02-2007, 07:37 PM
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thnxzzz a lot .... main bhi describe nahin kar sakti k mujhey kitni khushi ho rahi hai
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