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Old 07-29-2007, 08:26 PM
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Kaafi arsay kay baad dubara say kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai...socha MK mein share kar lon...ab chahye buri ho ya bhali...bardasht karna ap logon ka farz banta hai




Pyaar karne walon kay saath bohut bura hota hai
Laboon pay hansi, Dilon mein ghamon ka dera hota hai
Jeenay nahi dayti yeh dunya unhein
Juda ho jana hi un ka Muqaddar hota hai
Kehti hai yeh Farheen ab to sabhi sey
Pyaar na karna kabhi tum, Es ka anjaam bohut bura hota hai..
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Kaafi arsay kay baad dubara say kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai...socha MK mein share kar lon...ab chahye buri ho ya bhali...bardasht karna ap logon ka farz banta hai




Pyaar karne walon kay saath bohut bura hota hai
Laboon pay hansi, Dilon mein ghamon ka dera hota hai
Jeenay nahi dayti yeh dunya unhein
Juda ho jana hi un ka Muqaddar hota hai
Kehti hai yeh Farheen ab to sabhi sey
Pyaar na karna kabhi tum, Es ka anjaam bohut bura hota hai..
buhat khub likha ha .keep sharing.
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buhat khub likha ha .keep sharing.
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AAp ne bohat khub likha hai per agar payaar sachaa ho aur ik dusray per jitna bhi zulm ho payaar hi jeet ta hai.......
I m not blaming ur poetry it is superb without any fault.......
But concept is almost hopeless.........
Sorry if u mind........ But wat i think is wat i think...........
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Bahut Khoob Likha Hain...........



Par Hum Iss Tarah Se Soch Ne Lage Ge Tu Pyar Duniya Se Mit Jaye ga.....
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acha likha hai or sacha likha hai
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Bahut khoob...Keep going !!!
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AAp ne bohat khub likha hai per agar payaar sachaa ho aur ik dusray per jitna bhi zulm ho payaar hi jeet ta hai.......
I m not blaming ur poetry it is superb without any fault.......
But concept is almost hopeless.........
Sorry if u mind........ But wat i think is wat i think...........
nahi maine bilkul mind nahi kia..apne sahi kaha yeh poem bilkul hopeless hai...insaan shairi mein wohi likhta hai jo us k dil mein hota hai..jab woh khush hota hai to us ki shairi mein khushiyan jalakti hain..naraz hota hai tu us ki shairi mein rootha pan zahir hota hai..udaas hota hai to udaasi...or jab insaan har taraf se mayoos hota hai to woh apni shairi mein wohi likhta hai jo us k dil mein se awaz ati hai...
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Bahut Khoob Likha Hain...........



Par Hum Iss Tarah Se Soch Ne Lage Ge Tu Pyar Duniya Se Mit Jaye ga.....
pyaar dunya se mit hi jaye to acha hai....
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