Urdu Poetry Forum

Originally Posted by khushiarora

Zaby miaaa-----ULTA CHOR QOTWAAL KO DAANTE
aur kya dosti nibha rahe hain aap.......dost ki chori per pardaa daal kar.
Mujeh fakr hai mere doston per jo mujeh neik raah par chalne ki akal bakshte hain......

meri nazam ko choron ki wajeh se qadardaano ki zaroorat nahi
jo galti aapki SO CALLED shayara dost ne ki hai ----- woh kissi haal sahi nahi

Inocent-wishes ne mujeh sorry kahaa hai .....issi liye unhe iss baar maaf kiye deti hun.

Originally Posted by muhammad junaid khan

MISS KHUSHI

AAP KI POEM BOHAT ACHI HAI OR AAP NAI JO BAAT KI HAI WOH BAAT THEEK HAI MAGAR LEHJA THEEK NAHI HAI AAP NAI SHAYAD NOTICE NAHI KIA KAI POEM KAI NEECHAI KHUSHI TYPE HOWA HAI IT MEANS KAI POEM AAP KI HAI NA KAI INNOCENT KI NAHI

MAGAR ISTARHA THREAD MAI DIRECTLY ATTACK KARNA ACHI BAAT NAHI HUM YAHA MK MAI APNAI KHAYAL APNI BATAI KUCH AISI BATAI JO HAMAI ACHI LAGTI HAI SHARE KARTAI HAI NA KAI ATTACK KARTAI HAI HOPE U UNDERSATAND AGAR AAP KO MERI BAAT KA BURA LAGAI TO SORRY
AAP KA FRIEND

MJK

Originally Posted by sleepy_eyes96

i agree with u junaid.galti khushi ki bi nai hai.agr koi bi es ki jaga hta tu shayad esa he kerta.but gusy mai kafi bol gain wo.leken innocent ko bi chye tha k wo un se poch letin

Originally Posted by muhammad junaid khan

Bas Bohat Jhagra Hogaya Ab Is Thread Mai Mujhai Mazeed Explanation Nahi Chahiyai Or Nahi Mujhai Yai Maloom Karna Hai Kai Ghalti Kiski Hai Jo Hogaya So Hogaya Ab Yai Na Ho Is Baat Par Baat Karo Usi Baat Kai Peechai Koi Parhgai Hai Aap Log Innocent Ki Bhi Ghalti Nahi Hai Khushi Ka Bhi Kasoor Nahi Islyai Is Topic Ko Band Kartai Hai I Hope Aap Sab Meri Baat Ko Manaigai Aakhir Aik Dost Ki Baat Kaisai Taal Saktai Hai

Aap Sab Ka Dost
Mjk

Originally Posted by inocent-wishes

i agree with u junaid.galti khushi ki bi nai hai.agr koi bi es ki jaga hta tu shayad esa he kerta.but gusy mai kafi bol gain wo.leken innocent ko bi chye tha k wo un se poch letin


yahn inocent kia kary k kisi ki poetry ager ap ko achi lagti ha tu kia ap uss bandy ki permission loo gy pehly humary itny achy poet hain jin ki poetry hm perhty hain aor phir share krty hain kia unn ka naam batana zaruri samjha jata ha nahi naa.mager inn ka tu naam bhi likha ha .....phir bhi khushi madam naraz baithi hain aor na jaany kia kia kh rahi hain

Originally Posted by sleepy_eyes96

dekhain innoent hum log jin ki poetry share kerty hain un ki books publish ho chuki hain.esliay sub ko pata hota hai k ye falan poet ki hai.jaha tak bt hai hg ki poets ki tu agr unain apni poetry muhabat kadahmaishare kerni hoty tu wo khud ker skty hain.mai bi poetry kerty hon lerkin mai ne kbhi ki se apni poetry share nai ki.ye bt ap tub samjh sakain ge jub ap khud poetry kerin ge .