Urdu Poetry Forum

Asalama alaikum.........aaj main pehli martab kuch

share kernay ja raho hon apnay sab dosto say......yeh

ARSHAD malik ki choti see aik nzam hai lakin mughay

bohat pasand hai umeed hai k aap ko bhi pasand

aeey gee .......



kaha tha yaad hai tumnay...?



kaha tha yaad hai tumnay...



k main hon chand or tum ho



chandi mayri............... ........



mager jab chand chup jaye




bhlaa phir chandni kaisee...."

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nice sharing .....

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thanks madam.........

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to goya aaaaaaaaaaappppppppp p CHAND????????? hain but kis k chand, kahan k chand, or kaisay chand, kahin ap eclipses e to nahi hain, hm kahin gay chand kabhi to taroon ki bheer say niklay or meri khrki me aay bilkul tanha or akaila, me us ko do khari khari suna don, kaisa laga ? if u wont like it i will send u another one, that will be nice one, but try to get this at the moment,overall ur poetry is some what nice.

to goya aaaaaaaaaaappppppppp p CHAND????????? hain but kis k chand, kahan k chand, or kaisay chand, kahin ap eclipses e to nahi hain, hm kahin gay chand kabhi to taroon ki bheer say niklay or meri khrki me aay bilkul tanha or akaila, me us ko do khari khari suna don, kaisa laga ? if u wont like it i will send u another one, that will be nice one, but try to get this at the moment,overall ur poetry is some what nice.

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What dOesn't huRt - is nOt life; what dOesn't paSs - is nOt happIneSs."

nice sharing


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very nice.......

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v nice poem really gr8.....

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