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01-04-2007, 05:07 PM
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This story is writen by a famous writer but i dont knw the name coz my friend send me this story coz .. like it alot n i do as well.. Insaan siraf do insaanu ko nahin bhoolta. Ak wo jin se wo mohabat karta hai. Ak wo jin se wo nafrat karta hai. Pehle mere liye ye baat siraf ak khial thi, lakin ak umar guzar kar muj pe khulaye so fisaad sach k siwa kuj nahin hia....... ayse jese app k andar koi agar baat atak jaye,koi baat chubne lagey to app das tarha ki musrufiat se ussey bhulne ki kishish karen,lakin ak lamhey ka sukh ka saans akdam app ko ussi mukaam pe la khara karey,jahan se guzarne,chot khane ki takleef sehh kar app chahtey hon k waqat kabi app ko na ley jaye. Har dukh ka hal ussi dukh mein hota hia lakin logg sukh main ussey dundatey hen. Nahin jantey sukh' dukh hee ka chehra hia.Jis pe Allah ne nakab dhal rakhi hia. Jese "Fontana Trevi" ki masal hi le len. jese koi iss main coin penkey ta k wo yahan bar bar aye kiunkey uss k daman ko yahan kisi ki mohabat ne bandd liya hai aur koi coin penk k ye dua mangey k kash wo yahan kabi na aye,kabi na aya hota ta ke ye dukh jo mohabat ki surat takraya hia kabi dil ka makin na banta, yani coin ak hai ,bas duain alag alag hen. Jazba b ak hia bas do dilun ne ussey barta bohat muhtaleef kefiat k saath se hai. Har jazbey k do dhare hen,kahin na kahin ja ka ye ak ho hi jatey hen. issi liye shuru main likha tha k dukh aur sukh ak hi chehre k do roop hen.... uss din b i was in my clinic a girl enter n.... Doc: "App ka naam" "Aliyah... saab muje Aliy kehtey hen" Aliy "Duniya bohat bari hia. Lkain kabi kabi ye itni muhtasar kiun lagne lagti hia. aysa nahin lagta' app ak haath barha kar apni mann passand cheez utha saktey hen. Mann passand insaanu se mil saktey hen. App ko kia lagta hai Doc! kia wakey hi duniya bohat bari hia" main usse sune lagi.. "duniya bohat bari hia, agar mann passand na miley to bohat muhtasar hia agar mann chaha pehli bar mein khusboo ki tarha muthiuan main simat aye.." muje laga mere samne ak mareez nahin balkey kuj alag tarha ki soch bethi hia...aysi soch rare hai issi liye ayse log bohat gehri nazarun se dekhey jatey hne.....mera andaz b ab badal gaya tha kiunkey muje uss larki k andar se koi dukh nahin khojana tha. Bas sssey dsuney waley ki hasraat thi. Doc "kia app ghar main akeli hen" Aliy " nahin' mere ghar main bohat se ajnabi rehtey hen.hum achey ajnabiun ki tarha ak dusare se miltey hen, salam dua kartey hen, khana khatey hen,lakin rishtey bandan ye saab humare ghar ka headache nahin hen, han mere ghar main siraf ak hi shaks hai jo muje janta hai bohat achi tarha" Doc "koi bohat apna hia app ka? main ne uss se poocha aur wo muskuraney lagi.... Aliy " haan koi bohat apna hia lkain Doc! wo bohat apna muj se baat nahin karta. bass muje khamoshi se dekhta rehta hai. main bolti rehti hon magar ajj tak uss k lab nahin hiley magar wo jab itna dost hia to mu jse bolta kiun nahin hia" Doc " kia main ap k dost se mil sakti hon" Aliy " haan haan kiun nhain, lakin main abi app ko us se nahin milwa sakti kiunkey pehle muje apne dost se ijazat leni pare gi" Doc" ok c ya leter" aliy " bye Doc" kia uss itni bari duniya main app ak shaks mere ghar a sakti hen" Doc " abi nahin phir kabi" ............... 2 months later main apni dost Mariam k ghar gayi to ..... ghar main ghar ka koi fard nazar nahin a raha tha only nokar ne hi muje living room main pohnchaya.....achank koi enter hua ... main usse dekh k heran reh gayi magar wo heran nahin thi.. Aliy" app ne hi to kaha tha,, duniya bohat bari b hia aur bohat muhtasir b phir b ap heran hotey hen, kia zindagi se barh kar b koi herat ho sakti hia. jab zindagi per koi nahin chonkata us k hne na hone par nahin ho sakta , to app kiun chonkti hen ,,,ap to din raat ayse makamat se guzarti hen,,jahan chokana b bemani kam dekhai deta hia" Doc " kia app muje mere dost se nahin milwain gi" jiss se app ne kaha tha k milwain gi" wo chup se uth gayi...... Doc "mis Aliy main app se pooch rahi hon ?" Aliy"Aliy muje mere dost kehtey hen...aur mera ab koi dost nahin hai na Mariam na hi koi Aryan na koi aur....." Doc" plz dekhiye main uss din bohat masroof thi..." muj malum tha k uss ko ye word masroofiat se chir thi lakin mere bass aur koi bahana nahin magar wo baat sun hi nahin rahi thi achank mere zehan main jumaka hua........Aryan!" Doc "kia hum ajj Aryan pe baat nahin karin gaye" Uss se kehjey main koi diya sa buj gaya aur ankhun main intazar bana dil kamla gaya tha" Aliy " muje Aryan se koi mohabat nahin hia ab...ab sahid main uss se nafrat karti hon" Doc "nafrat, magar kiun koi khass waja?" main ne uss ko dkeha to wo namm mosamu main beeg gayi thi ... Aliy " pata nahin kiun lakin ab muje lagtahai Aryan se meri mohabat siraf mug tak thi,ye rah muj se muj tak hi ati thi. Tumhey nahin pata, main ne kabi mohabat ko lafzun ka perahan nahin pehnaya, main ne bohat khamoshi se siraf mohabat kartey rehne ki riazat ki, lakin phir b us ne jab muje saab k samne muje duthar diya to main ne socha , ye shaks kkia iss jazbey k kabil b hia? tab mere dil ne kaha, muje uss se mohabat ho hi nahin sakti. aur bass tab se main uss se nafrat karti hon" main ussey dekhti rahi ,wahan nafrat kain nahin thi, kahin b nahin thi,kmulaya hua dil ab b muntazir tha, tab main ne uss se kaha "insaan do logun ko nahin bhoolta. ak jin se wo mohabat karta hai.ak wo jin se wo nafrat karta hai.Aliyah! pata nahin lakin muje kiun lagta hai tum mohabat k roop par nafrat ka nakaab gira kar usse yad karna, yaad karna chati ho, tum shaid ussey bhoolna afford kar hi nahin kar sakti....." uss ne nigane juka lin.... Aliy"muje pehle lagta tha Doc! mohabat asar rakhti hia aur kitni hi khamosh satun main ho.Dil k andar kitne hi pardun main chupi rahey. lakin uss ki rishni pheel hi jati hia,ye barki lehar ki tarha dusare dil ko chuti hia. mohabat ka khaloos iss ihsaas ko dugna kar k itni shidat se dil main bedar karta hia k phirdil ankhun main a k beth jata hai. phir lagne lagta hai ,koi b baat namumkin nahin hia , kuj b aysa nahin hai jo humare dil na kar guzarey, magar ye jo hijar hia na, ye narsayi k saath mil kar uss lamhey na jane kaha nse a jata hai k har khush gumani weham lagne lagti hia aur har dukh siraf apne daman ka hisa mehsoos hota hia. Ye mohabat kuch nahin hia.ye nafrat b kuj nahin hia,kuj b kuj nahin, kuj b yahan saab kuj nahin hia aur kuj yahan kuj b nahin hia yahan saab kuj hai aur saab kuj nahin b hia........." achank hi uss ki tabiat kharab hona shuru ho gayi, uss ki mad ne us ko room main pohchaya.. tab main ne uss ko injection laga diya.... main injection laga k farig hui to uss k bed room ka jayza lene lagi..room main rakh main rakhi hui poetry ki books uss k khamosh izar ka pata dey rahin thi.... ye larki mohabat ko orna bachona samajne walirukh thi aur ye rukh yahan kahan a n pansii thi..rabort machines, insan yahan kahan they aur jin se wo phool,khusboo ki baat karti....aur uss ne na bolne ki ak mohabat ki rah dhundliy. Aryan ka pekar apne liye Tarasha..uss ka khial tha, ap kisi se musalsal mohabat kartey rahein to ye namumkin hai k dusare dil main koi ihsaas na ho, lakin yahan wi harr gayi thi. har action kaak reaction hota hia ye logic b yahan fail ho gayi thi aur bass isi harr ne ussey duniya se sari duniya se khafa kar diya tha... ak damm muje yaad aya to main ne uss ki mad se poocha "miss Aliyah ka bohat acha dost ko app janti hen k koun hia?" madd k chere pe dukh sa pheel gaya aur uss ne "dressin table" ki taraf dekh k kaha"aliyah bibi ka siraf ghar main ak yehi to dost hia jiss se bibi apne dil ki baat karti thi.aryan ki baat b un k party main chilane k baad hum pe khuli warna to bibi ye b siraf aine se keh k chup ho gayi thin" main ne to socha b nahin tha k jis dost ka uss ne bataya tha wo ak bejaan "AINA" b ho sakta hai....mere dil ko kisi be muthi main le k liya tha..main chalne lagi to yakdam khirki khulne se uss ki writting table pe rakhi hui book k pages urne lagey ak nazam pe safa mura hua tha.... jese kisi ne koi yaad thamne ki koshish ki ho,,,,,kisi lamhey ko muthiun main le k chuna chaha ho aur kuj lamhey khialun ki porun ko jala detey hen, Aryan ki tasweer nazam main kisi bokmark k tarha rakhi hui thi , lakin muje wo behos se larki uth k mere samne beth gayi hia aur muje wo nazam sunaney alagi hia nazam mere ird gird ghunjane lagi thi Udas rut, intazar mosam hawa ki yah basta ahatun se pare khamoshi ki zard chadar badan orey khazan rasida shazar ki tehni pe jhulta chand keh raha hia so b jaoo! k so b jaoo udas logo! wo anjaman jis ki jilmalati tamam shamin tamam raatin tamam baatin kabi tumhari mohabatun se barey zamanu ki tarjamn thin kabi tamam lamhun pe mehraban thin wo anjaman ab tumhari sochun se dur khuwabun ki dastak se pare sajey gi wahan ye nobat nahin aye gi kabi tumhare badan ki khusboo se khelti thi jo raat rani wo hijar k ad khuley darichey main hampatey hue akhari saans le rahi hia udas logo! ujar ankun k ainey tor do k in main na koi aks nagar hasti na koi basti hi basa sako gaye bas ak mata-e-hiat baki hia ab jisey tum ganwa sako gaye to issse pehle k sans ki dori toot jaye hawa ki hatheli se khusbun ka har ak rista hi toot jaye ujar khuwabun ki raguzar ka gubar ankhun main barh k har su hawa k hathun bikhar bhikar kar khud apne andar k dukh ki miti main khoo jao! hawa kehti hai sooo jaoo udas rut intazar mosam kabi kisi k na ho sakey gaye udas logo! Main ne kitab band kar di thi. MOhsin Naqvi k lafaz aur uss larki ka dukh ak jese they, main ne sansanatey wajood k saath ghar loot ayi.... 15 dinu baad Mariam ka phone aya k Aliyah ka B.P shot kar gya tha ussey fori tor pe hospital shift kar diya tha lakin uss B.P ne khamosh katil ki tarha usse andar se khatam kar k pehli aur ahari zarb lagai thi ,uss ka dil sakista ho gaya tha aur barwaqat oxgen na milne ki waja se wo iss bari si duniya ko chor kar chali gayi thi.............. "ye saab kia ho gaya , main to samaj rahi thi k saab theek ho jaye ga" Mariam keh rahi thi. main ne kuj nahin kaha, chup chap uss ko dkehti hi reh gayi......wo kitni khafa thi ,duniya se ,mohabat se,siraf main janti thi iss liye main chup thi. Bohat kuj jane lene wale hamesha chup hi rehtey hen wagarna humare adraak ka shor itna uncha ho, itna uncha ho k duniya k kaan phaat jain....kaan risne lagin..main chup thi aur wo chup hone ka darawa dene k liye yahan mere samne kafan main lifti hui thi.... aur phir ak aur mojaza hua.... Aryan uss k sirhan betha tha,, "mohabat, nafrat. main kuj nahin janta lakin tum meri dost thin. aur shaid muje tumhari adaat hi ho gayi hia. tum ankhin kholo, ak baar muje meri tarha duthar do lakin meri taraf dekho to, bhaley jitne bare mazmey mein main ne tumhara tamasha banaya tha, tum sari duniya ko bala kar khara kar lo phir muje jitne b sahat alfaz se buri tarha dutkharo,main uff b nahin karun ga, lakin plzzzzzz Aliyyyy! ankhain kholo, dekho mohabat wakey hi beasar nahin hoti. uss mohabat ne muje tumhari taraf morr diya hai, purey ka pura ,phir tum mera imtian kiun le rahi ho" wo roye gaya aur Mariam ki ankhun main b dukh hi tha aj arsa guzar jane k baad b Aryan muj se jab b milta hia yehi kehta hai.. "bohat sangdil larki thi...muj se saab kuj le gayi...magar main ne siraf ak mohabat biik ki tarha mangi thi, wo nahin dey saki.ye har waqat dene waley log kabi kabi kitne kanjoos ho jatey hen na" main kuj b kahey bina ussko dalasa dene lagti hon lakin koi mere andar kehta hai... "Insaan siraf do insaanu ko nahin bhoolta. Ak wo jin se wo mohabat karta hai. Ak wo jin se wo nafrat karta hai. " magar muje uss se mohabat thi na nafrat magar main phir b uss larki ko bhool nahin pati aur dil se koi awaz ati hai....... "Sukh darasal dukh ka hi chehra hai jis pe Allah ne dukh ka nakaab dal rakha hiatakey jiney ki koi sabil peeda ho sakey, magar mohabat "fontana Trevi" par najane koun khara hia, har bar coin ehkata hia, ak duaa mangata hai, lakin har dua kabi sukh aur kabi dukh se takra jati hiaaur bass mohabat kahin darmain main haathun se pisal jati hia.Haath khali reh jatey hen aur koi nahin janta, mohabat main nafrat ka zayka milane aur nafrat k bees main mohabat chupane waley itni itiaat k bawajod haath khali kiun reh jatey hen. mohabat aur khali haathun ka combination sahid koi nahin samj sakta na Aliy samj saki, na Aryan samja, namain samj saki hon aur APP Kia app samjey hen?"
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#2
01-04-2007, 11:17 PM
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hey, long buh nyce writting.... tc Dua go Khamoshi
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01-06-2007, 01:55 PM
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huh i knw its lil long but i think its somthing from our heart thats y i post it  |
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#5
01-17-2007, 06:37 AM
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Bohat Hi Khooooooooooob
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