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Originally Posted by m4mani Asalama alaikum.........aaj main pehli martab kuch share kernay ja raho hon apnay sab dosto say......yeh ARSHAD malik ki choti see aik nzam hai lakin mughay bohat pasand hai umeed hai k aap ko bhi pasand aeey gee ....... kaha tha yaad hai tumnay...? kaha tha yaad hai tumnay... k main hon chand or tum ho chandi mayri............... ........ mager jab chand chup jaye bhlaa phir chandni kaisee...." |
to goya aaaaaaaaaaappppppppp p CHAND????????? hain but kis k chand, kahan k chand, or kaisay chand, kahin ap eclipses e to nahi hain, hm kahin gay chand kabhi to taroon ki bheer say niklay or meri khrki me aay bilkul tanha or akaila, me us ko do khari khari suna don, kaisa laga ? if u wont like it i will send u another one, that will be nice one, but try to get this at the moment,overall ur poetry is some what nice.