hmm.agar ye first time tha ..phir to bohat hi achi likhi aap ne

India to jo kar raha hai so kar raha hai..ye ham log keon itnay meethay banay rehtay hain un k samnay..sahi kaha hai aap ne hamain thora karak hona chaiye

fursat mil gai aur perh bhee liii.....comments daikh laina

Main allah kay karam se theek hoon...aap sab k lian dua tou her pal rahti hai
ji zaroor ab aap se bhi baat hoti rahay gi
shukria...
Apna khayal rakhya ga..
Aur duaoon main yaad..
Dua go..
Mehwish afsar

Assalam o alaikum rrahi bhai..
Kia haal hain aap kay ??? Umed hai khariat se hoon gay..allah paak aap sab ko apnay hifzo aman main rakhay ameen...
Aap tou mashallah se bohat khubsorat likhtay hain aap ki new kawish ka intizar rahay ga...
Mera computer kharab tha aur parhai main bhi masroof thi is lian ghar hazir rahe ab inshallah hazri dati rahoon gi

shukria..
Apna khayal rakhya ga..
Aur duaoon main yaad..
Dua go..
Mehwish afsar

salam Rahi paen kiya hal hai ap ka aur ma ny kuch likha hai HG k liye......

http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/ashaa...-286246-2.html

Thnk u rrahi............... ..

Salam..
kaysay hain Rrahi...i read ur story today...sory for being late...
i just commented there u can check it...
tc
AH

Sallaaam & How r u........... check ti.........

http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/annou...ai-285990.html

u r welcome

aap ne kafi achi likhi hai....aap english stories likhtay hain ya urdu?

City main to pata nai..TV par hi daikhti rehti hon..mujhe to in Indians par bohat ghusa aata hai makhi bhi maray wahan to kahain gay Pak ne mari hai.

OK brother. I will do what best I can, and will send the correted draft back to you. Please give me some time for this. Bye for now......!!

hi.......
plz visit this thread........n dnt forget to comment!!
http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-...ho-285941.html

w salaam

me fine..alhamdulillah

how r u?

ur wlkm Rrahi jeee

U Most WellCOme

U welCome dear................

Very nice................ .

Wasalam

Very Nice in your first attemt
thanx for the Msg.

W/Salaam .emm f9 n hope u 2
Sure ..'ll read ur story .thnxx 4 Msg.

Dear Friend, Hope u r fine and doing well. I have read ur short story it was excellent. Congratulations.... Keep it up

Please spare some time to visit my thread at http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-poet-club-59/my-poetry-283369.html , I will be waiting for your comments/compliments on my poetry.
Thanks and best Regards