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This is a discussion on Raigzaar-e-umr..! within the Kanch ki Mehroo forums, part of the Urdu Poetry by Poets of HallaGulla category; suno ke raigzaar-e-umr ka yeh aakhri zarra meri bay jaN hathaili say...phisalta ja raha hai ab meri guzri musafat ki ...
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#1
09-27-2007, 12:53 PM
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suno ke raigzaar-e-umr ka yeh aakhri zarra meri bay jaN hathaili say...phisalta ja raha hai ab meri guzri musafat ki thakan ab ood aai hai mere qasid...suno..janay say pehlay itna kehna hai mere ujary shehar ke un gali koochoN maiN jao to jahaN bachpan bitaya tha...jahaN sab kuch ganwaya tha to us weeran khandar ko..payaam-e-aakhri daina waheeN aangan maiN dayeN hath pe...ik pairr daikho gay usi boorhay shajar ke... sin raseeda say badan par tum mere bay rang hathoN ki lakeeroN ki tarha...ik jaal daikho gay usi peepal ki chaaooN maiN...kisi masoom ke dil ne..kaii sapnay sajaye thay kisi ki aankh ke aansu...kisi dil ne bahaaye thay kisi ki jheel ankhoN ne...kaii saagar lutaye thay bohat narmi say us peepal ko chu kar..itna keh daina ke ab aankhoN ke yeh darya...kahiN saagar nahiN rotay muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay usay kehna mere qasid..! jinhoN ne umr sari teri chaooN maiN basar kar di woh aakhir pal tumharay pas aa kar..kuch na keh paye lipat kar tum say ro laiN gay..agar duniya maiN reh paaye suno qaasid..!! wahaN say chand qadam ke faslay par...aik chokhat hai wohi chokhat hai yeh piyaray... jahaN sajday kiye hum ne...jahaN par zindagi haari jahaN kuch pal jiye hum ne....jahaN par jan yeh waari jawaaN margi pe meri shehr yeh maatam kunaaN hoga magar...us aik chokhat par...ajab sa hi samaaN hoga.. wahaN raqsaaN sabhi chehroN pe kuch ra'aniyaaN hoNgi wahaN bajti chaharoN su...bohat shehnaiyaN hoNgi wahaN jiski nazar maiN jeet janay ki thakawat ho magar...us dil nasheeN chehray pe..gehri muskurahat ho samajh laina mere qaasid...yehi qatil mera thehra..! meri aankhaiN yeh lay jao...mera yeh kaam kar daina usay ji bhar ke takna tum....meri ankhoN maiN bhar laina usay chupke say keh daina... "tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai.. nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..." nahiN...balkay...mer e qaasid... usay tum kuch nahiN kehna..!! Mehroo~
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03-23-2008, 10:10 AM
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yeh bhi bht piyarey likhey hai 1.gif ")1")
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03-30-2008, 08:58 PM
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Bohat khoobsurat. Lafzoon ka intihai behtreen istimal hay. aur aakhri line tu kamal hay. Usay tum kuch nahi kehna, wah.
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04-05-2008, 12:16 AM
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04-05-2008, 12:16 AM
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