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Originally Posted by RUKHSAAR  nAzAm tHi hE achi...tAu tArEef kaRnA LAzmi tHi.... bEhas aUr tAkraaR sE aApKi itni acHi nAzm pArhNay kO miLi....sO kOi baA tnAhi... bEhaS aUr tAkrAar jaRi rAKhiYE ..naJAnAy kOnsi pOsHiDa kHoObi bAhiR aAjAye... aAp nE kiTni sHayEri LikH RaKhi hAi...? aUR kABhi kisi sHaiR kO pArH k yE LagA k kAasH wOh aap nE likhA hOta..??? |
itnii taareef matt kijiye ... logon ko aor bazaat-e-khud mujhe bhii hazam nahii hogii ...
aap ko nahii pata
mujhe aaj kall waise bhii behass-o-takraar kii ashad zarurat hai
...
pehle kaafii kuch likha tha, lekin phir jab aahista aahista pata chala k shayerii asal mein hai kya to samjo pehla likha sab kuch radhii ho gya, 17 aisii kaavishein hain jinhein main share kerne k qaabil samajta hoon (
aahista aahistaizafa ho raha hai, time mile to likhta rehta hoon) ..waise to ongiyaan bongiyaan waafir maqdaar mein mojud hain
hmmmm ... ka ek sher hai, jise parh ker yeh ehsaas jaagta hai k kaash yeh main ne likha hota ..."
bitha k yaar ko pehlu mein raat bhar ghalib .... jo kuch nahii kerte, woh kamaal kerte hain" ...