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~"~ Vote For the Best Ghazal ~"~ (May 2007)

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View Poll Results: Vote The Best Ghazal
Ghazal#1 9 30.00%
Ghazal#2 1 3.33%
Ghazal#3 1 3.33%
Ghazal#4 0 0%
Ghazal#5 0 0%
Ghazal#6 4 13.33%
Ghazal#7 1 3.33%
Ghazal#8 3 10.00%
Ghazal#9 2 6.67%
Ghazal#10 1 3.33%
Ghazal#11 1 3.33%
Ghazal#12 6 20.00%
Ghazal#13 1 3.33%
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Old 05-22-2007, 12:51 PM
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Vote the Best Ghazal Of the Contest :-)

Rules wohi hain

1. Apni post ki howi Ghazal Ko Vote nai kar saktay

2. Fake Voted Post ko Contest say out kar diya jaye ga

3. Voting Ki last date 30th May 2007 hai .

Kush rahyea :-)




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Old 05-22-2007, 01:16 PM
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Ghazal#1

thaki thaki si aas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai

koi to dard ras hai,ye dil bohat udas hai

ye to hai ya koi lota puta howa koi khayl hai

koi to aas pass hai ye dil bohat udas hai

nidhal yun howy k sab zaroraten hi mar gaien

na bhok hai na paiyas hai ye dil bohat udas hai

najany kis khayl se boja boja hai aj kal

yehi jo tera udas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai

ajab tarah ke waswason main gir gai hai zindagi

umeed hai na aas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai

na jao ji9sam per sajy howy hasein libas per

badan to khush libas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai


Ghazal#2



Ghazal#3

WO JO DAWEDAR HAI SHEHER MAIN K SAB HI KA NABZ SHANAS HON

KABHI AA K MUJ SE TO POOCHTA K MAIN KIS K GHAM MAIN UDAS HON

YE MERI KITAB-E-HIYAT HAI ISE DIL KI AANKH SE PERH ZARA

MAIN WARQ WARQ TERE SAMNE TERE RUBURU TERE PAS HON

YE TERI UMEED KO KYA HOWA KABHI TU NE GHOR NAHI KIYA

KISI SHAM TU NE KAHA TO THA TERI SAANSE HON TERI AAS HON

YE TERI JUDAI KA GHAM NAHI K YE SILSILE TO HAIN ROZ K

TERI ZAAT IS KA SABAB NAHI KAI DIN SE YOUN HI UDAS HON

KISI AUR KI AANKH SE DEKH KER MUJE AISE WAISE LAQAB NA DE

TERA AITBAR HON JAN-E-MAN,NA GUMAN HON NA QIYAS HON



Ghazal#4

This one is not a ghazal that is why excluded from the contest so please don't vote for Ghazal # 4
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Ghazal#5

This one is not a ghazal that is why excluded from the contest so please don't vote for Ghazal # 5
regards
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Ghazal#6

Thaka gaya hai musalsal safer udasi ka
Aur ab b hai meray shanay pe ser udasi ka

Wo kon keemya ger tha k jo bekhair gaya
Teray gulab say chehray pe zer udasi ka

Meray wajood k khalwat kaday ma koi tu tha
Jo rakh gaya hai dia taaq per udasi ka

Ma tuj say kasay kahoon yar_e_mherban meray
K tu elaaj nahi meri her udasi ka

Ya ab jo aag ka derya meray wajood ma hai
Yahi tu pahlay pahal tha sharer(شرر) udasi ka

Na janay aaj kahan kho gaya sitara_e_shaam
Wo mera doost mera humsafer udasi ka

Faraz deda pur aab(دیدہ پُر آب) ma na dhoond osay
K dil ki tah(تہہ) ma kahin hai ghuher(گُہر) udasi ka



Ghazal#7

uads
udasio logo sa pyar karna koi to sikhy
sfayd lamho ma rand bharna koi to sikhy

koi to ay khiza ma paty ogany wala
golo khoshbo oon ko kad karna koi to sikhy

koi to dikhay mohabto ka srab mojhko
mare nigaho sa bat karna koi to sikhy

koi to ayy nae roto ka pygam la kar
andhare rato ma chan ban na koi to sikhy




Ghazal#8



Aik pal mein zindgi ki UDASII dey gaya
Woh Judaa hotey huwey kuch phool basii dey gaya

Noch kar shakhoon k tann sey khushk patton ka libass
Zardh mosam Banjh rut ko Baylabasii dey gaya

Subhaa k tarey meri pehlii DUA tere liey
Tu dil-e-Baysabrr ko taskeen zarah si dey gaya

Log malboon mein dabey saaey bi daffnaney lagey
Zalzala ehl=e=Zameen ko badhawasii dey gaya

Tundh jhonkey ki ragoon mein ghool kar apna dhunwaan
Ik diya anndhii hawa ko Khud shanasii dey gaya

Lay gaya MOHSIN woh mujh sey aabrr buntaa assmaan
Ous k badley mein zameen sadiyuon ki piyasii dey gaya






Ghazal#9

udaas raaton mien tez coffee ki talkhiyon mien,
wo kuch ziyada hi yaad ata hai sardiyon mien,

mujhey ijazat nahin hai us ko pukaarney ki,
jo goonjta hai lahu mien,seeney ki dharkanon mien,

wo bachpan jo udaas rahon mien kho gaya tha,
mien dhondta hun usey tumhari sharartoun mien,

usey dilasey to dey raha hun magar ye such hai,
kahien koi khauf barh raha hai tasalliyon mien,

tum apni pouron sey janey kia likh gaye thay jana,
charagh roshan hain ab bhi meri hatheliyon mien,

jo tu nahin hai to ye mukammal na ho sakiengien,
teri yehi ehmiyat hai meri kahaniyon mien,

mujhey yaqeen hai wo thaam ley ga, bharam rakhey ga,
ye maan hai to diye jalaye hain andhiyon mien,

har ik mausam mien roshni si bekhairtey hain,
tumharey ghum key charagh meri udasiyon mien.



Ghazal#10








Ghazal#11

aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii


aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii
ishq hotaa to koi baat bhii thii

jalata phirta huN kyuN do-paharon mein
jaane kyaa chiiz kho gai merii

vahin phirta huN main bhi Khaak ba-sar
is bhare shahar mein hai ek gali

chhupataa phirta hai ishq duniyaa se
phailatii jaa rahii hai rusvaai

ham_nashin kya kahuN ke vo kyaa hai
chhoD ye baat niind uDane lagii

aaj to vo bhii kuchh Khaamosh saa thaa
main ne bhii us se koii baat na kii

ek dam us ke haath chuum liye
ye mujhe baiThe baiThe kyaa suujhii

tuu jo itanaa udaas hai 'Nasir'
tujhe kyaa ho gayaa bataa to sahii






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Ghazal#12




Ghazal#13

Bohat Dinon Say Nahi Apnay Darmeyaan Wo Shaks
Udass Kar K Hamey Chal Deya Kahan Wo Shaks

Wo Jis Kay Naqhs-E-Kadam Say Charagh Jalte Thay
Jalay Charagh Tu Khud Ban Gaya Dhowan Wo Shaks

Uss Aik Shaks May Thein Dil-Rubaeyan Kia Kia
Hazar Loog Melein Gay Magar Kahan Wo Shaks

Chupa Liya Jisay Pat-Jharr Kay Zard Patton Nay
Abhi Talak Hay Baharoon Per Hukumraan Wo Shaks



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Old 05-22-2007, 01:20 PM
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kis kis ko vote doon
sabee inni achi ghazlain hain :clap7
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