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This is a discussion on ~"~ Vote For the Best Ghazal ~"~ (May 2007) within the Ghazal forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Vote the Best Ghazal Of the Contest :-) Rules wohi hain 1. Apni post ki howi Ghazal Ko Vote nai ...
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View Poll Results: Vote The Best Ghazal | |||
| Ghazal#1 | | 9 | 30.00% |
| Ghazal#2 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Ghazal#3 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Ghazal#4 | | 0 | 0% |
| Ghazal#5 | | 0 | 0% |
| Ghazal#6 | | 4 | 13.33% |
| Ghazal#7 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Ghazal#8 | | 3 | 10.00% |
| Ghazal#9 | | 2 | 6.67% |
| Ghazal#10 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Ghazal#11 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Ghazal#12 | | 6 | 20.00% |
| Ghazal#13 | | 1 | 3.33% |
| Voters: 30. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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![]() Vote the Best Ghazal Of the Contest :-) Rules wohi hain ![]() 1. Apni post ki howi Ghazal Ko Vote nai kar saktay ![]() 2. Fake Voted Post ko Contest say out kar diya jaye ga ![]() 3. Voting Ki last date 30th May 2007 hai . Kush rahyea :-) Whispers ![]()
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| Ghazal#1 thaki thaki si aas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai koi to dard ras hai,ye dil bohat udas hai ye to hai ya koi lota puta howa koi khayl hai koi to aas pass hai ye dil bohat udas hai nidhal yun howy k sab zaroraten hi mar gaien na bhok hai na paiyas hai ye dil bohat udas hai najany kis khayl se boja boja hai aj kal yehi jo tera udas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai ajab tarah ke waswason main gir gai hai zindagi umeed hai na aas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai na jao ji9sam per sajy howy hasein libas per badan to khush libas hai,ye dil bohat udas hai Ghazal#2 ![]() Ghazal#3 WO JO DAWEDAR HAI SHEHER MAIN K SAB HI KA NABZ SHANAS HON KABHI AA K MUJ SE TO POOCHTA K MAIN KIS K GHAM MAIN UDAS HON YE MERI KITAB-E-HIYAT HAI ISE DIL KI AANKH SE PERH ZARA MAIN WARQ WARQ TERE SAMNE TERE RUBURU TERE PAS HON YE TERI UMEED KO KYA HOWA KABHI TU NE GHOR NAHI KIYA KISI SHAM TU NE KAHA TO THA TERI SAANSE HON TERI AAS HON YE TERI JUDAI KA GHAM NAHI K YE SILSILE TO HAIN ROZ K TERI ZAAT IS KA SABAB NAHI KAI DIN SE YOUN HI UDAS HON KISI AUR KI AANKH SE DEKH KER MUJE AISE WAISE LAQAB NA DE TERA AITBAR HON JAN-E-MAN,NA GUMAN HON NA QIYAS HON Ghazal#4 This one is not a ghazal that is why excluded from the contest so please don't vote for Ghazal # 4 regards Whispers Ghazal#5 This one is not a ghazal that is why excluded from the contest so please don't vote for Ghazal # 5 regards Whispers Ghazal#6 Thaka gaya hai musalsal safer udasi ka Aur ab b hai meray shanay pe ser udasi ka Wo kon keemya ger tha k jo bekhair gaya Teray gulab say chehray pe zer udasi ka Meray wajood k khalwat kaday ma koi tu tha Jo rakh gaya hai dia taaq per udasi ka Ma tuj say kasay kahoon yar_e_mherban meray K tu elaaj nahi meri her udasi ka Ya ab jo aag ka derya meray wajood ma hai Yahi tu pahlay pahal tha sharer(شرر) udasi ka Na janay aaj kahan kho gaya sitara_e_shaam Wo mera doost mera humsafer udasi ka Faraz deda pur aab(دیدہ پُر آب) ma na dhoond osay K dil ki tah(تہہ) ma kahin hai ghuher(گُہر) udasi ka Ghazal#7 uads udasio logo sa pyar karna koi to sikhy sfayd lamho ma rand bharna koi to sikhy koi to ay khiza ma paty ogany wala golo khoshbo oon ko kad karna koi to sikhy koi to dikhay mohabto ka srab mojhko mare nigaho sa bat karna koi to sikhy koi to ayy nae roto ka pygam la kar andhare rato ma chan ban na koi to sikhy Ghazal#8 Aik pal mein zindgi ki UDASII dey gaya Woh Judaa hotey huwey kuch phool basii dey gaya Noch kar shakhoon k tann sey khushk patton ka libass Zardh mosam Banjh rut ko Baylabasii dey gaya Subhaa k tarey meri pehlii DUA tere liey Tu dil-e-Baysabrr ko taskeen zarah si dey gaya Log malboon mein dabey saaey bi daffnaney lagey Zalzala ehl=e=Zameen ko badhawasii dey gaya Tundh jhonkey ki ragoon mein ghool kar apna dhunwaan Ik diya anndhii hawa ko Khud shanasii dey gaya Lay gaya MOHSIN woh mujh sey aabrr buntaa assmaan Ous k badley mein zameen sadiyuon ki piyasii dey gaya ![]() Ghazal#9 udaas raaton mien tez coffee ki talkhiyon mien, wo kuch ziyada hi yaad ata hai sardiyon mien, mujhey ijazat nahin hai us ko pukaarney ki, jo goonjta hai lahu mien,seeney ki dharkanon mien, wo bachpan jo udaas rahon mien kho gaya tha, mien dhondta hun usey tumhari sharartoun mien, usey dilasey to dey raha hun magar ye such hai, kahien koi khauf barh raha hai tasalliyon mien, tum apni pouron sey janey kia likh gaye thay jana, charagh roshan hain ab bhi meri hatheliyon mien, jo tu nahin hai to ye mukammal na ho sakiengien, teri yehi ehmiyat hai meri kahaniyon mien, mujhey yaqeen hai wo thaam ley ga, bharam rakhey ga, ye maan hai to diye jalaye hain andhiyon mien, har ik mausam mien roshni si bekhairtey hain, tumharey ghum key charagh meri udasiyon mien. ![]() Ghazal#10 Ghazal#11 aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii ishq hotaa to koi baat bhii thii jalata phirta huN kyuN do-paharon mein jaane kyaa chiiz kho gai merii vahin phirta huN main bhi Khaak ba-sar is bhare shahar mein hai ek gali chhupataa phirta hai ishq duniyaa se phailatii jaa rahii hai rusvaai ham_nashin kya kahuN ke vo kyaa hai chhoD ye baat niind uDane lagii aaj to vo bhii kuchh Khaamosh saa thaa main ne bhii us se koii baat na kii ek dam us ke haath chuum liye ye mujhe baiThe baiThe kyaa suujhii tuu jo itanaa udaas hai 'Nasir' tujhe kyaa ho gayaa bataa to sahii ------------- Ghazal#12 Ghazal#13 Bohat Dinon Say Nahi Apnay Darmeyaan Wo Shaks Udass Kar K Hamey Chal Deya Kahan Wo Shaks Wo Jis Kay Naqhs-E-Kadam Say Charagh Jalte Thay Jalay Charagh Tu Khud Ban Gaya Dhowan Wo Shaks Uss Aik Shaks May Thein Dil-Rubaeyan Kia Kia Hazar Loog Melein Gay Magar Kahan Wo Shaks Chupa Liya Jisay Pat-Jharr Kay Zard Patton Nay Abhi Talak Hay Baharoon Per Hukumraan Wo Shaks Last edited by whispers; 05-23-2007 at 07:57 AM. |
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| kis kis ko vote doon ![]() sabee inni achi ghazlain hain :clap7
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