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A very touchy ghazal..........

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Old 10-06-2008, 08:53 AM
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Agar na zoharaa jabiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare
To phir ye kaise kaTe zindagii kahaaN guzare
Jo tere aariz-o-gesuu ke daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to vo lamhen balaa-e-jaaN guzare


Mujhe ye vaham rahaa muddaton ke jurrat-e-shauq
Kahiin naa Khaatir-e-maasuum par giraaN guzare
Har ik muqaam-e-mohabbat bahut hii dil-kash thaa
Magar ham ahal-e-mohabbat kashaaN-kashaaN guzare


Junuu.N ke saKht maraahil bhii terii yaad ke saath
Hasiin hasiin nazar aaye javaaN javaaN guzare

Merii nazar se terii justajuu ke sadaqe men
Ye ik jahaaN hii nahiin saikaDon jahaaN guzare

Hajuum-e-jalvaa me.n paravaaz-e-shauq kyaa kahanaa
Ke jaise ruuh sitaaron ke daramiyaa.N guzare

Khataa mu'aaf zamaane se badagumaa.N hokar
Terii vafaa pe bhii kyaa kyaa hamen gumaaN guzare

Khuluus jis me.n ho shaamil vo daur-e-ishq-o-havas
NaaraigaaN kabhii guzaraa na raigaaN guzare

Isii ko kahate hai.n jannat isii ko dozaKh bhii
Vo zindagii jo hasiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare

Bahut hasii.n sahii suhabaten gulon kii magar
Vo zindagii hai jo kaaNTon ke darmiyaaN guzare

Mujhe thaa shikvaa-e-hijraaN ki ye huaa mahasuus
Mere qariib se hokar vo naagahaaN guzare

Bahut hasiin manaazir bhii husn-e-fitarat ke
Na jaane aaj tabiiyat pe kyon giraaN guzare

Meraa to farz chaman-ba.ndii-e-jahaaN hai faqat
Merii balaa se bahaar aaye yaa KhizaaN guzare

Kahaa.N kaa husn ki Khud ishq ko Khabar na huii
Rah-e-talab men kuchh aise bhii imtahaaN guzare

Bharii bahaar men taaraajii-e-chaman mat puuchh
Khudaa kare na phir aaNkhon se vo samaaN guzare

Ko_ii na dekh sakaa jin ko do dilon ke sivaa
Mu'aamalaat kuchh aise bhii daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to isii ek musht-e-Khaak ke gird
Tavaaf karate huye haft aasmaaN guzare


Bahut aziiz hai mujh ko u.nhii.n kii yaad "Jigar"
Vo haadasaat-e-mohabbat jo naagahaaN guzare
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Old 10-06-2008, 09:24 AM
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Originally Posted by sweetchilli View Post
Agar na zoharaa jabiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare
To phir ye kaise kaTe zindagii kahaaN guzare
Jo tere aariz-o-gesuu ke daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to vo lamhen balaa-e-jaaN guzare


Mujhe ye vaham rahaa muddaton ke jurrat-e-shauq
Kahiin naa Khaatir-e-maasuum par giraaN guzare
Har ik muqaam-e-mohabbat bahut hii dil-kash thaa
Magar ham ahal-e-mohabbat kashaaN-kashaaN guzare


Junuu.N ke saKht maraahil bhii terii yaad ke saath
Hasiin hasiin nazar aaye javaaN javaaN guzare

Merii nazar se terii justajuu ke sadaqe men
Ye ik jahaaN hii nahiin saikaDon jahaaN guzare

Hajuum-e-jalvaa me.n paravaaz-e-shauq kyaa kahanaa
Ke jaise ruuh sitaaron ke daramiyaa.N guzare

Khataa mu'aaf zamaane se badagumaa.N hokar
Terii vafaa pe bhii kyaa kyaa hamen gumaaN guzare

Khuluus jis me.n ho shaamil vo daur-e-ishq-o-havas
NaaraigaaN kabhii guzaraa na raigaaN guzare

Isii ko kahate hai.n jannat isii ko dozaKh bhii
Vo zindagii jo hasiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare

Bahut hasii.n sahii suhabaten gulon kii magar
Vo zindagii hai jo kaaNTon ke darmiyaaN guzare

Mujhe thaa shikvaa-e-hijraaN ki ye huaa mahasuus
Mere qariib se hokar vo naagahaaN guzare

Bahut hasiin manaazir bhii husn-e-fitarat ke
Na jaane aaj tabiiyat pe kyon giraaN guzare

Meraa to farz chaman-ba.ndii-e-jahaaN hai faqat
Merii balaa se bahaar aaye yaa KhizaaN guzare

Kahaa.N kaa husn ki Khud ishq ko Khabar na huii
Rah-e-talab men kuchh aise bhii imtahaaN guzare

Bharii bahaar men taaraajii-e-chaman mat puuchh
Khudaa kare na phir aaNkhon se vo samaaN guzare

Ko_ii na dekh sakaa jin ko do dilon ke sivaa
Mu'aamalaat kuchh aise bhii daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to isii ek musht-e-Khaak ke gird
Tavaaf karate huye haft aasmaaN guzare


Bahut aziiz hai mujh ko u.nhii.n kii yaad "Jigar"
Vo haadasaat-e-mohabbat jo naagahaaN guzare
unique aur pasandida ghazal hai
khoob
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Old 10-06-2008, 02:55 PM
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nice................ .....
thanz janab.............
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unique aur pasandida ghazal hai
khoob
buht buht shukria............. ..
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Originally Posted by sweetchilli View Post
Agar na zoharaa jabiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare
To phir ye kaise kaTe zindagii kahaaN guzare
Jo tere aariz-o-gesuu ke daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to vo lamhen balaa-e-jaaN guzare


Mujhe ye vaham rahaa muddaton ke jurrat-e-shauq
Kahiin naa Khaatir-e-maasuum par giraaN guzare
Har ik muqaam-e-mohabbat bahut hii dil-kash thaa
Magar ham ahal-e-mohabbat kashaaN-kashaaN guzare


Junuu.N ke saKht maraahil bhii terii yaad ke saath
Hasiin hasiin nazar aaye javaaN javaaN guzare

Merii nazar se terii justajuu ke sadaqe men
Ye ik jahaaN hii nahiin saikaDon jahaaN guzare

Hajuum-e-jalvaa me.n paravaaz-e-shauq kyaa kahanaa
Ke jaise ruuh sitaaron ke daramiyaa.N guzare

Khataa mu'aaf zamaane se badagumaa.N hokar
Terii vafaa pe bhii kyaa kyaa hamen gumaaN guzare

Khuluus jis me.n ho shaamil vo daur-e-ishq-o-havas
NaaraigaaN kabhii guzaraa na raigaaN guzare

Isii ko kahate hai.n jannat isii ko dozaKh bhii
Vo zindagii jo hasiinon ke daramiyaaN guzare

Bahut hasii.n sahii suhabaten gulon kii magar
Vo zindagii hai jo kaaNTon ke darmiyaaN guzare

Mujhe thaa shikvaa-e-hijraaN ki ye huaa mahasuus
Mere qariib se hokar vo naagahaaN guzare

Bahut hasiin manaazir bhii husn-e-fitarat ke
Na jaane aaj tabiiyat pe kyon giraaN guzare

Meraa to farz chaman-ba.ndii-e-jahaaN hai faqat
Merii balaa se bahaar aaye yaa KhizaaN guzare

Kahaa.N kaa husn ki Khud ishq ko Khabar na huii
Rah-e-talab men kuchh aise bhii imtahaaN guzare

Bharii bahaar men taaraajii-e-chaman mat puuchh
Khudaa kare na phir aaNkhon se vo samaaN guzare

Ko_ii na dekh sakaa jin ko do dilon ke sivaa
Mu'aamalaat kuchh aise bhii daramiyaaN guzare
Kabhii kabhii to isii ek musht-e-Khaak ke gird
Tavaaf karate huye haft aasmaaN guzare


Bahut aziiz hai mujh ko u.nhii.n kii yaad "Jigar"
Vo haadasaat-e-mohabbat jo naagahaaN guzare
very nice sharing sis xcellent all wishes wid stars
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Beautiful/Excellent........... .SweetChilli........ ...G..!!@~~
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