Urdu Poetry Forum

**smumair10** · #1 10-26-2007, 12:42 PM

Rooh Tak Jo Utar Jaye Main Woh Asar Rakhta Hoon
Tujh se Bicahr Kar G Loon Itna Sabar Rakhta Hoon

Bhale Hi Aankheen Chura kar Chupa Lo kuch Mujh se
Jo DIl main jhank le Tumhare Woh Nazar rakhta Hoon

Bhale Hi Nakam Ho Gaya Main Karobar E Duniya main
Tum ko Pyar Tha Mujh se Yeh Fakhar rakhta Hoon

Tumhari Berukhi ne Mujhe Jina Sikha diya hai
Ghum main bhi Muskurane ka Huner Rakhta hoon

Tum ne Giraya To Khuda ne Thaam Liya Mujhe
Jahan Qadam ho main Wahin nazar rakhta Hoon

**bushi** · #2 10-26-2007, 01:37 PM

wooooooow BOHOT KHOOOB

mashamshah · #3 10-26-2007, 02:21 PM

although whole ghazal is wonderful but i liked this first line coze it is very meaningful n it gives a message to every body.....

" Rooh Tak Jo Utar Jaye Main Woh Asar Rakhta Hoon
Tujh se Bicahr Kar G Loon Itna Sabar Rakhta Hoon"

ONE SHORT POEM !!!!!
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" Be nishaan manzilon ke safar per

kabhi niklo

to jano gay

ke hum jaise musafir

kiyon ghar ka rasta bhool jate hain.. "

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**yasiraq** · #4 10-26-2007, 03:29 PM

Zabardast...very nice...excellent

Thanks for sharing n keep sharing !!

**silent atitude** · #5 10-26-2007, 05:15 PM

WoNdErFuLl PoStInG..

nICe CoOLleCt!oN..

Keep ShAr!nG..

**tutu** · #6 10-26-2007, 08:46 PM

"Tum ko Pyar Tha Mujh se Yeh Fakhar rakhta Hoon"

nice one.

**s_uzair** · #7 10-26-2007, 10:19 PM

nice umair jee kamal karditta tusi............wah

**13 Mera 7 Rhey** · #8 10-26-2007, 11:08 PM

awasome

BOHAT UMMDA bohat Khub I jst LOVE this

Gr8 Poetry VERY NICE DEAR